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Reviewed By: youki_luver78 On: July 23, 2007 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I loved it soooo much. You're a great writer. Please, oh PLEASE do not abandon this fanfic! Please update as soon as possible please! I love it so far!
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Title: kawaii-miko
Reviewed By: kawaii-miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 01:01 CDT
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update soon im lovin the story
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser30 On: July 23, 2007 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG! I LOVE this fanfic soooo much! I've been waiting like forever for you to update! Please update the next chapter as soon as possible! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: El On: June 26, 2007 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story but I had some trouble with it to start with. I think the Beginning is a little to rushed I would add a flash back to Inu and sess starting to work together, go in to more detail of kagome going on the war path. The plot is good but you need to work on your ooc-ness. and cut back on the (a/n)'s they can get in the way if its important for the reader to know don't add it in a A/n just add in the writing. but plaease do update I can't wait
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Reviewed By: Patty530 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 02:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really your story,especially the later chapters. I'm very curious now. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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cool!! love it up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, thats was an interesting chapter. I would really like to see Koenma hyped on candy, it be so funny! Well can't wait to read more, especially the bonding ceremony, keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so caught up in your story that I read all of the chapters you had up....to me over three hours. I hope you plan on adding more soon, I really can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 03:56 CDT
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Very, very interesting chapter. I loved the way kagome managed to manipulate Kurama, not once, but TWICE. Loved Youko and Kurama's interactions. Sad that Kurama allowed himself to enjoy one day with her and then turned it off. And hey! He owes her a date. Loved the writing and the length of the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Hollow_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the storys going great and it chapter 17 if something ds not happen soon i might go MAD!!....anyway finish the other chapters soon and update i RELLY RELLY RELLY like this story and want to see it done. tell next time.
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 18:32 CDT
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Well other than myself feeling thet it was a bit short, This last chapter was AWESOME! I hope that....Well....Yeah, I think that Kagome should Screw up Kuramas names...and...and....well....I dont wanna ask you to do anything you dont want to, But in ANY case I hope you get hit with insparation for the naxt few chapters soon! and ggod luck. I love it!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is there ANY WAY KAGOME could GO TOO?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 20:10 CDT
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Hmmm. Very interesting chapter. Poor Kagome and Kurama -- tormented by erotic dreams. So, how is it that he can't tell she's attracted to him? And what a cop out for her to run off like that. This is going to take a long time, isn't it? Too bad she DIDN'T slip up and call him Kurama -- maybe then they'd get somewhere. Loved Shizuru's comments to him. Poor Kurama. *sigh* Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: randomperson72 On: April 11, 2007 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! the death tree is SO cool! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dragonpink2002 On: April 01, 2007 23:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Looooove the story.....=^.^=
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