| "Decisions" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: demon's purity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2009 05:36 CDT
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when are yougoing to update?! it was just getting to th good part ^^
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2008 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm one of ur reader's and i like your story your story is on my fav list. smile
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Reviewed By: akumakoroshimaru On: March 21, 2008 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue please please soonish great story update soon
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Youko's Dish [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 23:56 CST
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oh dear and I thought that Kurama was smarter than that! tsk tsk anyway love your fic and can't wait for your next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 17:02 CST
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EEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee You got to update soon I just spent a good amount of time reading this entire fic.....o gosh I realy hope you update soon....as for leaveing anything out I don't thing you have up to this point, actrully I am realy happy because alot of times when I read a long extened fic the author contradic's them selves and it realy ruins the story, the only think that I can think of that you shouldn't for get about is that Kagome has know Yusuke, and Kayko sence they where 4 am I right and they planed to get to getther and do something when she was done with this traviling to the past thing, It funny how she orginaly thought that she would only be there a couple months hehe....O ya and Hiei remember that she found him and saved him and stuff, I would love to see his reaction to seeing her in the future....hehe.....oh and Koenma to he recognized Kagome when she when by the cafe even if didn't see her face, ya got to have and confrentation with then sooner of later, what I want to know is why Kurama doesn't inlist the help of his friend on this matter I mean at least Hiei, they make not say any thing about it but I'm sure that they are the best or friends. And just so you know since you seem so insecure about your own writing, I love you writing It alot better then some fic's I read its a comfertable reading style, though I would never intentionaly put other fic's down because I could read alot of fic's and enjoy then anyways I just want you do know that you are a good story tell Its a gife not every one possesses, so keep up the good work and update soon....Meow XD
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Reviewed By: darkmagicuser On: December 13, 2007 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! That was a great new chapter! Please update ASAP! Thanks.
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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows(nsi) On: December 12, 2007 21:26 CST
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I like it and it has been a while since you updated...please contenue
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Reviewed By: Patty530 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 09:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had been awhile since I checked up on your wonderful story. Your last chapter surprised me. Pleasantly, I assure you. I'm glad Kurama finally gave in to his desires and upset that he wants to run from Kagome. I hope that they get it figured out soon. :)
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Reviewed By: rain dance [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. take alittle more time if you need it and I can not wait till the new chapters are writen. You have a gift in captering a person with your story.
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: October 22, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this was a great chapter! and FYI that is a lime, any sexual thing without actual sex is a lime, if they actually have sex then thats a lemon... keep writing! Ja Ne xoxox
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Reviewed By: misfits284 On: October 22, 2007 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes thanks for the update and i can't wait till you update again. you did i very good job on that last chap and i loved it
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Reviewed By: bookworm182 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:26 CDT
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youshould totatly finish thi story. Its like freaken addictive...like CHOCOLATE! Its really awsome, you should really finth thi story.
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 10:58 CDT
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You did just fine with the ceremony scene, in my opinion. Stuff like that is always hard to write. I really enjoyed the interaction between Kagome and Kohaku in this chapter--clever girl to make him stop blaming himself!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,great chapter. i liked that the ceremony was short, bit you cover all the important stuff. Can't wait to read the next one soon. Oh, and I think that Sango's pink glowing stomach means that the baby is a Miko maybe??
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