| "One Bond" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 09:39 CST
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Good chapter. I'm glad Yuugi is alright. Atemu will lead them to the victory, I'm sure.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 14:21 CST
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That's sooo mean! i have to know what happens next! update really soon!
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Reviewed By: Gogina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 08:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, yeah! Atemu isn't being controlled anymore! Please, update soon. We have to find out if Yugi's dead, if Atemu can bring him back, or if he's just severely hurt (Well, yeah I guess he is severely hurt). Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2007 07:04 CST
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Yuugi was very brave. Even though he was scared he still stood for what he believed in and he won. I'm glad he got Atemu back to his right mind. Aknedin is dead meat. Good chapter.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 08:46 CST
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ATEMU, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WHY MUST IT END LIKE THIS!?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2007 07:15 CST
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Good chapter. I hope the love they share can bring him out of it. Poor Yuugi is probably scared to death.
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Title: woot!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hebi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I love the story!!!now I cant wait to see what happens next,oh hikari,you've made your yami very happy!cant wait!woot!OwO
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 16:17 CST
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Good chapter. He's making a big mistake putting Yugi in danger. Oh well, he deserves what ever he gets.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2007 01:21 CST
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Good chapter. That's the problem when dealing with criminals. Those guys gave up so easily to Atemu with the promise of a large reward. I'm guessing they told Aknadin that they caught Yugi and that's how they caught him and the others. I really love the way this is going. It seems like he is expecting this betrayal so I hope they are all careful when they get there.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 17:15 CST
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YAY! I was wondering when the next chap was gonna update. *sigh* when will they ever live in peace? Ah well, hope the next updates soon.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 04:19 CDT
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Good chapter. Well, she has a half a plan. I hope she can find out where they are and help the others. Is Atemu Perfection? Sounds like it. I hope those men talk.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 14:25 CDT
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no Joey got caught, please tell me that Mrs.Mouto has a plan. very good chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 07:44 CDT
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Good chapter. I love this too bad Joey and Alysia got caught. I hope Mrs. Mouto will be okay but I have a feeling that she wanted to be caught. She probably has a plan.
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alysia is so violent. They all are. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 06:01 CDT
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Now they're onto something here. Is Atemu the perfect one? He seems to be. I'm glad Joey figured it out. There is probably a secret lab under the old one or adjacent to it. I hope they find them soon.
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