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Reviewed By: Noko Marie On: November 26, 2007 13:55 CST
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Why do I feel so suspicious about where this is going?
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Title: Clap,clap, BRAVO!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I must say again that is probably the only Sesshomaru/Kagome story I have ever liked - I just love the way you portray Sesshomaru - making him so complex, so very HIM - yet so sympathetic. And of course the sex is just AWESOME - although I am really a Inu/Kag lemon addict and not too proud to admit it. Looking forward to when you do the third chapter, but I am learning patience when it comes to your work - even though I long to read your stuff - so hard to find another writer that I love any where near as much as I love your work. So, will we see a new chapter to "Space Hanyou" any time soon? Just love that story!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Kay On: August 11, 2007 16:46 CDT
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wow this was really good. i liked it tons!! now it says (chapter 1) at the top, is there a continuation to this? well anyway congrats, a lot of ppl can't write sess/kag but you did a very good job love it.
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RAWR! That was awesome! One of the best Sess/Kag I've read as of late. Truly enjoyed it! Bravo!!! ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 22:59 CDT
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Sessh and Kag should be together this is perfect....but when Inu finds out he will be pissed.
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Reviewed By: AHAYNES On: May 30, 2007 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
50 points for you! This was beautiful. I'm not normally a sesskag shipper, but I couldn't help it. Sesshomaru blushing is too cute.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:59 CDT
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I meant story, not artwork, sorry... I was using a form letter.
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Reviewed By: FlameTwirler [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 14:54 CDT
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Wow, that is magnificent, and very sad.
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:57 CDT
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oooh that is so sweet...poor sesshomaru though.
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Reviewed By: GinaBristow [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Maybe your PWP stands for Plot within porn? I'm disappointed that this has to be a one shot. It was really sweet in, and despite its raunchiness. I love your other stories, it's refreshing to see a good writer take on this paring(and do it so well).So all in all thanks for the great story.
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Reviewed By: MetsukiKaraTen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 18:34 CST
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Fabulous lemon! Just angsty enough to give it a sense of realism, and Sess's need to control seemed spot on, as did Kagome's moments of hesitation, embarrassment. I can see how plot wanted to get in the way. I find myself caught in an endless loop, considering the 'cause v effect'. Those memories that Sess has, won't they have changed with the addition of this/these encounters in the modern era? Or was it meant to be... in that sense I must admit that it left me unfulfilled, hungering for more resolution. Silly plot, naughty plot, getting in the way like that!! Ah, but that's the beauty of the one shot, leaving us to ponder...
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Reviewed By: not satisfied (yet) On: February 19, 2007 14:20 CST
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Yummy. It could be made into a really angtsy story. I'm just saying...
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Reviewed By: Totally Kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 11:27 CST
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Brilliant lemon and plot, although it was a PWP. This is one of the best SessKag stories I have ever read because it's highly realistic. Instead of one of those "Inu is with Kik, so Kag is heartbroken and goes off and fucks a nicer Sess", we have some very interesting character views. I think Kag is the most surprising for me, not Sess, because I don't think she would go against her morals for her brother. But then again this IS her brother. Sess was definitely in character, which is amazing since I don't imagine Rumiko Takahashi's Sess would do that. But YOUR Sess... the Sess that's been through all this shit and lived... I can imagine doing that. I HAVE to compliment you on your excellent characterization. Keep on writing stories!
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Title: beautiful
Reviewed By: entropy9 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 06:38 CST
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that's it... the end was beautiful. i smiled : )
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Title: Cover your eyes kiddies
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 04:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woo wee, that's one smokin hot lemon. It's nice to read you again, but I thought I'd mention that you have this rated P (pre-teen), and I'm sure you don't want little Sally-mae, or Billy to get an eye opening education in ruff lovin... ;)
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