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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 20:24 CST
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Although I hate Sess/Kag fics, this is quite good. Sexy, dark and angsty, exactly what I've come to expect from your stories. I love it.
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Reviewed By: White Luna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 13:33 CST
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w0rd. That was teh bomb... ^^
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Title: steamy
Reviewed By: angel of darkness148395 On: December 04, 2007 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! Those lemons were HOTT!!! I love this story so much!!! Your style of writing is fantastic! I love how you made Sesshomaru like this suffering soul. Tormented for centuries by Rin dying. It was very dramatic. This story has we confused though. Will Kagome leave Inuyasha to go with Sesshomaru, or will Sesshomaru just live in his suffering; be happy with his visits with Kagome and live. I hope not. Kagome is much better with Sesshomaru than Inuyasha. Anyway keep up the good work. I am dying to read the rest of this story. Again please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kendra NLI On: November 27, 2007 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so looking forward to reading more. First of all mind F..K with the time traveling just wow.
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Reviewed By: ash26 On: November 27, 2007 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok wow this is really good i didnt think that this was going to go anywhere but the plot is so much better then i ever thought it would be keep updating i really want to read more
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Reviewed By: leilachan *nsi* On: November 27, 2007 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is such an original idea. i love it. even if it gets confusing at times (my fault) since i tend to be slow when it comes to the time thing. lol but the way you write sess in this is amazing. really, he has to be one of the most difficult to write. he is to multi-faceted and well, like you could never understand all of him. anyway, lovely chap, and i hope to see the third soon. i'm interested in how this will end. especially since inuyasha is alive. hmmm, where is kagome after these five years?? ack, please write soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! A second chapter!!! And that leads me to hope for more. I really like what you've done with it and am glad it wouldn't leave you alone. You definately write the best lemon, but I really adore everything...characterization, turn of phrase, so well-crafted! Thanks for continuing!
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 19:07 CST
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Wow. Usually I hate time paradox, but this was hot. I would suggest the second chapter be divided and explored slightly. Taking Kagome for the first time can stand alone if done as a memory attached to the first chapter, but then I'd put in the Inuyasha confrontation. It feels like a wandering plot otherwise, especially as it ends wondering if IY will confront him someday and we know he does at the beginning of the same chapter. Otherwise... hot scenes and I really liked the concept that she comforts him in the past even after their affair in the future and that she'd confess to IY and he'd swallow his pride and watch her deal with the grieving taiyoukai. Sweetie that he is! Anyway, well written as usual.
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Reviewed By: Noko Marie On: November 26, 2007 13:55 CST
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Why do I feel so suspicious about where this is going?
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Title: Clap,clap, BRAVO!
Reviewed By: Roxotaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 05:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I must say again that is probably the only Sesshomaru/Kagome story I have ever liked - I just love the way you portray Sesshomaru - making him so complex, so very HIM - yet so sympathetic. And of course the sex is just AWESOME - although I am really a Inu/Kag lemon addict and not too proud to admit it. Looking forward to when you do the third chapter, but I am learning patience when it comes to your work - even though I long to read your stuff - so hard to find another writer that I love any where near as much as I love your work. So, will we see a new chapter to "Space Hanyou" any time soon? Just love that story!
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Reviewed By: Ms.Kay On: August 11, 2007 16:46 CDT
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wow this was really good. i liked it tons!! now it says (chapter 1) at the top, is there a continuation to this? well anyway congrats, a lot of ppl can't write sess/kag but you did a very good job love it.
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Reviewed By: docbevculver [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2007 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RAWR! That was awesome! One of the best Sess/Kag I've read as of late. Truly enjoyed it! Bravo!!! ~Ang~
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 22:59 CDT
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Sessh and Kag should be together this is perfect....but when Inu finds out he will be pissed.
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Reviewed By: AHAYNES On: May 30, 2007 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
50 points for you! This was beautiful. I'm not normally a sesskag shipper, but I couldn't help it. Sesshomaru blushing is too cute.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 22:59 CDT
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I meant story, not artwork, sorry... I was using a form letter.
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