| "Terms of Engagement" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 18:17 CST
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LOL! wow. I haven't read a tokio/Saito fic in forever. They are so hard to come by, but yours was fantastic!!!!! Please keep up the great work! Miztikal-Dragon
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Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 07:32 CST
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Excellent story. I appreciate the details you brought to it and got caught up in it. The pacing was good and the crazy uncle was a good villain, as cowardly as any in the Kenshin world. Tiny aside is that I thought Battousai didn't give up his sword until the end of the fighting. Not that it's important to the plot at all. Also the uncle mentions giving away the location of the headquarters as being important, but that isn't mentioned again in the final chapter. Perhaps just a throw away line about them escaping the rebels? Minor quibbles, but I really enjoyed your writing and the differing perspectives, especially during courting.
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Reviewed By: yellowgackt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 15:32 CST
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ahahah! hajime is cuckoo. hm i wonder if i can be that devious and sceeming? doubt it.
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Reviewed By: yellowgackt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:45 CST
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gasp! tokio is TOKIO!! god im dense.. but she still grosses me out with that disguise.
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Reviewed By: yellowgackt [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:35 CST
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good! disgusting gorss!! poor man, tokio is hideous!!! urrrhg!!! Someone should kill her!!! eeeeww...
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2007 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fabntastic chapter and a great ending for the stroy. I shall tail you now to read more of your fiction. Keep up the great work hun :)
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohhh no Saitous down. And whats Tokio upto now. Ican't wait to read more. Very much enjoyed the chapter :)
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Reviewed By: keleos On: October 12, 2007 07:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo glad you updated!! The plot is getting better and better! Tokio and Saitou are one of the best couple in the whole anime/manga universe, and you portray them with a stunning ease! Thank you and keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Raysheed On: October 09, 2007 16:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your story. The comedy and romance is just perfect. There is not many stories I have read that are better than this one. I can wait till you finish it.
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Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 07:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter i'm so enjoying this. I can't wait to see what happens to the evil uncle of hers whne Saitou finds out!
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Title: Marvellous
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way your playing these to off of each other :) They compliment each other so well they don't seem to realise it. More please :)
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Title: i love thgis so much
Reviewed By: calculatooo On: July 27, 2007 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
trithfully u are an very amazing aouthr i love this strory it is soooooo good and i cant wait to read the next chaptwr. ur writing style is so cooooool and i love this pairing...hee hee i am going to bookmark thisd story because i luv it soo much yeah ur awsum
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Title: MArvellous
Reviewed By: theablackthorn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2007 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great i'm really enjoying all their little nuances and plots. More please ;)
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Reviewed By: Anninat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 11:25 CDT
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yay, you updated again. I can't believe you don't have more reviews, but keep up the good work - I look forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: Anninat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 07:31 CDT
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thank you for another fantastic chapter, you rock!
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Reviewed By: Anninat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 15:27 CDT
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Oh, I like this! The humour is great, thanks for posting this - can't wait until the next update!
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Title: Hilarious.
Reviewed By: levity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 22:50 CDT
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I look forward to reading more of this story!
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