| "Anbu Administration High" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: Magami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2008 12:45 CDT
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Omigod! It's been so long since I've read anything on the site, even though I am on it almost daily. I thought your writing would be a good place to start, and What do you know, I am not disapointed! lol. This story is really quite good, but I far prefer your 'Itaachi's Addiction'... So.,... Yeah. Continue? For me? xDDDDD lol.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: KittyXD [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2008 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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I really like this story. I hope you keep it going. I may be a new fanfic writer but I've seen some good fanfics and yours is GREAT! I really want to find out what happens in the rest of this story. PLEASE UPDATE!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey sorry it has taken me sooo long to write a review for all of your wonderful updates. things have been super crazy. (example: i had to take my SAT today) but back to what i came here for. this story is great! i had read it a while after you posted the new stuff but i just hadn't had time to write. but i love the way this is going all the twists and turns are great and its very interesting. i cant wait to see what will happen next. your style is very unique and i hope you continue to grow as a writer. keep up the great work and write more when you can! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hiinata On: August 20, 2007 13:11 CDT
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I think you made Hinata way too flirty. No oofence, but it just isn't the Hinata I'm used to.
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Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
all 10s!! luved it. great cliff hanger, nice little puzzle for sasuke to figure out. luv the whole sitiuation of this one! great job!! ^_^ i hope you have a safe move and i will try my best to wit patiently for ur next upload. keep up the good work and mail me if u need me. ^_^
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Title: Chapter 7
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! i luved this chapter it was sooooo great! cant wait to read what happens next...and i am about ot go and do that now. (lol)
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Title: another great chapter
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooo, i luv this one too! yay! keep up the good work. write if u need me. ^_^ cant to wait to see what u do with this cliff hanger! ;)
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Diegoo On: June 01, 2007 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the writting, the characters lifes are so vivid! i wish my life was like theirs kind of lol
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 06:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so great. deffinately worth the wait! great job! love the cliff hanger too! ^_^ looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: quatre n takato are te best [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 12:53 CDT
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KEEP WRITING PLEASE!!!!!
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Title: rocks!!!
Reviewed By: AnimeCatGirl080291 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this rocks!! told u it would! sorry i took so long to read it though, ^_^; but it was deffinately worth it! if u need ne more help or proofreading just ask. i should be able to do it more quickly. (hehe) ^_^
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Reviewed By: navyboarder17 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 15:28 CST
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::shudders:: idea of sasuhina... blargh. update soon, i look forward to reading it all. cough naruhina is better cough cough.
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Reviewed By: sasuluvssaku4now [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
For your very first fanfic, I'd say it's pretty good. Just watch your grammar and proofread constantly. Later on, you should look back at your earlier chapters and update them a bit for mistakes and maybe a few additions here and there. I love the whole idea and I can't wait to see the SasuSaku in this, maybe a NejiSaku as well? That'd be so awesome! Yaoi and Lemons are always welcome, haha. Try to keep them in character, unless your going for something else. Overall, it's pretty good but still on the rough side, LoL, as if I'd be a pro at something like this >.< But I too started out REALLY rough, so I'm looking forward to your future works ^^
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm afraid of who the girl is. Please don't let it be Ino or Sakura! PLease! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: mml100pink [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool fan-fic and I like the ideas. Keep up the good work! Ummm, how's this for an idea: Sasuke and Naruto wind up in two completely different classes and don't see each other except for lunch and in shop class/ tech lab(combined).
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