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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 08:31 CDT
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Okay let's not point out how long it's taken me to review this latest chapter... But yes, I did love it! As brilliant as always. That bit about Jou eating the dog meat was priceless. I mean, I cringed and laughed at the same time. Pretty good idea though, I must say. Kaiba's such an ass, man. Just wanted to punch him! ... You know, metophorically... Anyway, keep up the good work and write more soon! I look forward to it! -tackles- -love- Byes!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 06:48 CDT
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Great chapter. I feel a little bad for the hawker but not much, really. I feel worse for Jounouchi, Kaiba is really mean. I hope things will get better for Jounouchi.
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 04:13 CDT
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XD Nice Poor Jou, Kaiba can be so mean! I loved the Borat references though, I can so see Marik running around naked and yelling "Sexy Time" everywhere XD. And have apet chicken... yeah.... X3 OMG cliff hanger with Mako, never thought we'd see him again, though it does figure he'd be here XD Good work, can't wait for more! (I'll send yah more quiz survey things as I get them, I'd send you this one I'm doing on gaia but it's over 1000 questions long XD)
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 02:16 CDT
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XD Wow Poor Yuugi and Ryou. I'd go mad with a yami like those two... eh.. never mind -___-++ Yami and Bakura better do something good...poor Jou being stuck with such a sour puss too.. and poor Otogi and his wallet. It almsot seems like a depressing vacation ^^;;;
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 02:23 CDT
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Another brilliant chapter! I loved the old man running off with Otogi's wallet. Gold! Good muse for adding that in there. Also loved how Katsuya just fell out of the closet XD -giggles- Nicely done. Totally made my day to get an update from you on this fic!! So write more soon!! I can't wait to find out what happens =D
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 00:13 CDT
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I loved it. Jounouchi came out of the closet with a bang. Poor Yuugi, at least it wasn't as bad as it could have been. That poor hawker won't know what hit him.
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 00:54 CDT
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Very good ^_^ O_O I didn't think Yami and Bakura would get into that much of a scrap... yet it's quite entertaining. And poor Jou-kun. Figures he'd get stuck in a closet.. X3
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Reviewed By: Reconvoy-the-Writer On: May 17, 2007 20:44 CDT
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I love this! I read this just today and I cannot wait to read the rest of this. I think Yugi and Ryo need to give their other selves a valium for the whole trip! HAHAHAHAHAH!!! When are Yami and Yugi going to get together?
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 09:09 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated. Bakura and Yami are very funy. I hope they can settle their differences so Yugi amd Ryou can finish. Good chapter.EPQY
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 02:30 CDT
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Phwee!! I loved this chapter. What did you think wasn't so great? I always enjoy the way you have all the characters interact with one another. It's so funny.. I can't stop laughing the whole time. Maybe I'm just weird like that... It makes me wish I'd made more major characters in my own story, then I could have had more fun with it like you do. Although, on the other hand, I don't think I could live up to your example. It really is great, don't worry about how the chapter turned out ^_^ I can't wait to see where you go with this and which pairings arise. I'm excited!!! hehe. ja ne~
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Reviewed By: etsuyo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful fic! Although, I shouldn't use past tense as I am really looking forward to reading how it continues in the future ^_^ (hint hint.. eh heh...) Really, really funny. You made me laugh so many times throughout reading this! I just love romantic comedies; best type of fiction out there, in my personal opinion. And I love how you, as you yourself even stated, have tried to manuver the pairings now so that it might not turn out just how you expect it to... You're doing a very good job indeed, I hope you keep writing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! ..I should also go read some of your other stuff in the meantime, ne? ^_~ See ya around! :3
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Reviewed By: lo On: April 19, 2007 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, another chapter. I can't wait till you start developing some relationships.
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Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 14:52 CDT
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Yay! Marik and Bakura are so bad, I love listening to them piss at each other like babies X3
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 07:12 CDT
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Good chapter. I love Earl Grey tea myself. Poor Joey, I wonder if Kaiba will let up on him.
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Reviewed By: Sugar Shinimegami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 01:47 CDT
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KYAAAAAA!!! It's getting even better! *Swoons* I'm practiclly drooling for another chapter! *Kicks self* NOw I feel bad for not reviewing sooner!
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