"Meryl's What Should Have Been" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Pisquenta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 16:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think it's what could've possibly happened if Vash and Meryl had actually got to be together. It would be over in an instant. It was beautifully written
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Reviewed By: faye-faye14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 16:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You did a fantastic job! Vash and Meryl are both so stubborn!!! You did a great job at keeping the in character, and I can really see the two of the refusing to voice their "love." I really enjoyed your fic, thanks for posting it
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Title: axel720 Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 15:48 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Beautiful! Not many great Meryl/Vash fics around, and this one is definately a great one =) The characters fit in, and all of it makes sense. Ofcourse he has to leave. I like that you didnt twist the plot to keep them together, but I'm sad that they're not =(
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