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Title: I can not believe it is over...
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Magnificent...thats is all i can say about this chapter and this story overall. I love the way you portrayed Reeve's parents, their were horrendous just as i imagined them to be. "A worthless, gay, murderous piece of filth" that line, actually those two sentences that and the one she said before were so hurtful that this has become one of my favorite lines in the chapter, how could someone be that way? I genuinely felt anger and sadness for Reeve and Reno during that whole dinner fiasco. but the ending was sweet and warmed my heart, i am sad that this story is over i can truthfully say that i enjoyed reading this story, i love all your stories but this one has become one of my favorite, and i thank you for writing it. You did a splendid job when you wrote this story (btw i found and error in the last chapter you said "Reno opened his mouth to speaking, wanting to say something, anything." i believe it should be speak not speaking). Once again thank you for writing such a wonderful story, i wished it was longer lol but i love what has been written and this whole story. You are a wonderful writer and this story is a magnificent collection of detail, romance, and a great writing style. When i read your stories i can really feel what the character is feeling and what they are going through. Please keep writing because it would a shame if you stopped. Your loyal reader: anime_lover_kohaku
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow is really all i can say about this fic, i have been wanting to to read and since you wont have internet until the end of june and my summer vacation just started i decided to finally read it. i read it earlier non stop but had to stop at 8 before finals i finally read 9 and omg how i loved it. This story is FANTASTIC I love Reno and Reeve
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:20 CDT
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I DO enjoy the twists and turns! Anyway, this was a great chapter, as usual, it's nice that three others know about them two. And...MASCULINE PRIDE, "His masculine pride had died a frilly death a long time ago." Haha, I love your fic. Updateupdateupdate........
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 03:05 CDT
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YAY! Reeve loves him! ^_^ And that last chapter didn't sound too cliche. Or, if it did, I didn't mind because this fic is the bomb! Keep it coming...
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 21:50 CDT
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OHHH...YEAH.... XD Reeve got owned. THat was a great chapter, again as usual... Cant wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 19, 2007 21:08 CDT
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damn that was hot XD Really great chapter! and I mean really good
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 15:43 CDT
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Haha, I love drunk scenes, and you are such a great writer! ^_^ And where will their passions lead to, I wonder... updateupdateupdate
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn! This is great. Besides the fact that the fic is VERY hot,I like how you subtly work minute details from the other fics in the "Shattered Arc." Reeve projecting and Tseng picking up on it. Also Tseng's "proclivites" nice word for what he does.
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 12:00 CDT
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I love them! And your story is so well written. What can I say? Update, bug your beta readers. I wanna know where this is going!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (Lazy) On: March 30, 2007 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! This just keeps getting better. The way you keep ratcheting up the tension between those two is killer. Reeve's lame excuses are laughable. I'd bet a great deal of money that Tseng ssaw what was going on and that was why he sent Reno and Rude to check the perimeter.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 30, 2007 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats was a great chappy ^__^ Finally some action!! Your making Reno seem like such the pushy bad guy :P
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 00:27 CDT
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Reeve is CRUSHED. It made me laugh, "so tell me, is Reno working out for you..." Haha, Updateupdate, you're a pretty fast updater though. Or maybe it was just this chapter?
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (Lazy) On: March 22, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whistles* This chapter more of a reaction from me than some lemons. ( Yes I'm talking about that kind of reaction. :D ) The interplay was great. I could literally feel their attraction strike sparks. Tseng's exit line was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 13:26 CDT
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As I have said before, this is such a cool take on their histories!And you are a great writer, update soon! I want to see where you are taking this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (lazy as always) On: March 15, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, Reno took up smoking because he wasn't used to fresh air? That's brilliant, and so is their immediate fascination with each other.
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