| "Shattered Boundaries" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 00:20 CDT
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I DO enjoy the twists and turns! Anyway, this was a great chapter, as usual, it's nice that three others know about them two. And...MASCULINE PRIDE, "His masculine pride had died a frilly death a long time ago." Haha, I love your fic. Updateupdateupdate........
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 03:05 CDT
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YAY! Reeve loves him! ^_^ And that last chapter didn't sound too cliche. Or, if it did, I didn't mind because this fic is the bomb! Keep it coming...
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 21:50 CDT
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OHHH...YEAH.... XD Reeve got owned. THat was a great chapter, again as usual... Cant wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: April 19, 2007 21:08 CDT
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damn that was hot XD Really great chapter! and I mean really good
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 15:43 CDT
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Haha, I love drunk scenes, and you are such a great writer! ^_^ And where will their passions lead to, I wonder... updateupdateupdate
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 14:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hot damn! This is great. Besides the fact that the fic is VERY hot,I like how you subtly work minute details from the other fics in the "Shattered Arc." Reeve projecting and Tseng picking up on it. Also Tseng's "proclivites" nice word for what he does.
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 12:00 CDT
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I love them! And your story is so well written. What can I say? Update, bug your beta readers. I wanna know where this is going!
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (Lazy) On: March 30, 2007 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! This just keeps getting better. The way you keep ratcheting up the tension between those two is killer. Reeve's lame excuses are laughable. I'd bet a great deal of money that Tseng ssaw what was going on and that was why he sent Reno and Rude to check the perimeter.
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Reviewed By: margyy On: March 30, 2007 04:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thats was a great chappy ^__^ Finally some action!! Your making Reno seem like such the pushy bad guy :P
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 00:27 CDT
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Reeve is CRUSHED. It made me laugh, "so tell me, is Reno working out for you..." Haha, Updateupdate, you're a pretty fast updater though. Or maybe it was just this chapter?
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (Lazy) On: March 22, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*whistles* This chapter more of a reaction from me than some lemons. ( Yes I'm talking about that kind of reaction. :D ) The interplay was great. I could literally feel their attraction strike sparks. Tseng's exit line was great. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 13:26 CDT
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As I have said before, this is such a cool take on their histories!And you are a great writer, update soon! I want to see where you are taking this. ^_^
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat (lazy as always) On: March 15, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, Reno took up smoking because he wasn't used to fresh air? That's brilliant, and so is their immediate fascination with each other.
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Reviewed By: cleartempest [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 02:19 CST
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It's cool how you have managed to explain the personal histories AND make it seem like they are both searching and dreaming about their futures. It's a cool take on Reno and Reeve's history.
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Reviewed By: ChessyKat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic set-up. You gave them both such great personal histories. It is very clear that they are both searching for something and the way you lay it out seems like converging paths.
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