| "Chocolate Trouble" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Hillarious and KAWAII
Reviewed By: Shikon Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2008 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow Inuyasha eating chocolate then gonna be nice in the end KAWAII I wanna see that on tv and Kagome is also funny and soooooo romantic so is Inuyasha oh well I guess thats what you call LOVE
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Title: Cute Story
Reviewed By: Spikecicle On: March 17, 2007 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was such a cute story with Inuyasha eating chocolate and getting sick on it,and Kagome taking care of him resulting in the end of Inuyasha finally telling Kagome his feelings for her.That story reminded me when my dog was just a puppy and alive,my mom gave him some chocolate and he got so hyper that later that night my dad came home from work to discover he crapped all over the kitchen floor lol.But my dog was really lucky to be alive because you're most definetly right about chocolate being toxic to dogs.
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Title: i love ur story!!!
Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 22:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love it so much !!!!!
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Reviewed By: nindeoronra [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was so sweet and so very original. Excellent story and I'll be looking forward to seein more from you.
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Reviewed By: spirit wolf On: February 23, 2007 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohh. this was such a cute story. i luv it! and u kept inu and kag's personalities the same! i cant wait to read ur next story!
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Reviewed By: LostInSiberia_14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this. It's sweet, original, and you did a great job of keeping Inu and Kaggy in character. Lots and lots of kudos and I can't wait to check out your other work. :]
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