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| "Inevitable Decay" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Darringan On: June 08, 2007 19:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY ENDDD????? It was a great fanfic! Rin and Shirou pairing was very good! Please CONTINUE!!!!
| Title: Shirou/Saber
Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
No!!! Please no! Shirou has to stay with Saber! He HAS to!!! I know some support the ShirouRin couple, but I really prefer to see (or read) Shirou with Saber. They have so much in common, in the way they see life and things, and their attitudes, the way they are so selfless...everything! I think some parts of this story are getting somewhat confusing, escpecially concerning the servants: Assasin and Caster, their respective Masters and all those minions that have been appearing. We also don't yet know who the man who was killed was, what Servant he had, if the servant is still around, and if that were the case if you're planning to send that servant to Ilya. I'm also wondering if Sakura will become a Master this time around (as Shingi was), and if that were to be the case on who's side she'll be. Yes, a lot of wonderings, and I suppose that at least several of them I'll get to know as the story progresses. So I'll wait. Please update soon.
| Title: I was Right
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 08:54 CDT
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Hah! I guessed right ^______^ He WAS Tadakatsu, I could guess that you also play some video games ( Samurai Warriors) that featured Honda as a playable character Or maybe you just like Historical figures >_> But that was shocking ending the fic there I hope you get to start it again sometime.
| Title: Why so short?
Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why didn't you write more? You left me wanting more. I really don't like cliffhangers (even when I use a lot of them in my own fics...). As a matter of fact, I have no idea who Honda is, I may go look it out later. I really didn't like the scene where that man was killed so cruelly, specially after you had talked about him having a family, and what the servant said he would do with that family. I'm perfectly conscious that this story is narrating a war, that in war people die and all that...it's just that I don't like it when they're people you have somehow managed to make me like, even if it's by something as simple as them having a family to look after. Anyway, that's just my opinion (that may be why I'll never write a Drama...) Anyway, I still think this is a god fic and hope you'll be updating soon.
| Reviewed By: Jyoohan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 00:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Awsome chapter, eating my goldfish snacks while reading, lol. Plenty of action for my taste, loved it! Dialogue was fun read as well, witty! I wiki-ed that Honda guy and read his entire biography. Turns out he was in Samurai Warriors. Didn't play that game much. Did some good research into the guy and impressed me. Very nice. Better hurry up and finish writing my fourth chapter. Got to write up a couple of more scenarios.
| Reviewed By: Fallen Seraph On: March 09, 2007 10:46 CST
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That was mean. Tell us the name, man.
| Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Why did you end it there? It's just not fair. I really hope you'll update soon. This fic was caught my interest and I would like to read more about it. Oh, and too bad Archer didn't come back, I kid'a liked him. And I really hope this will be a Shirou/Saber, I like that pairing.
| Title: My Guess
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 09:30 CST
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If my guess is right, I know that Lancer VERY well since he's one of my Ace Characters in a video game, I won't spoil it for the other readers though XD I like the new lancer very well coz he has such a n amazing accomplishments in serving his lord.If my guess is correct, I'm sure he'll make the story more interesting.
| Reviewed By: Jyoohan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 19:13 CST
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Damn it! That was way to sudden! I can't think of any past heroes with your description, or I don't know any with those descriptions. Your descriptions are fun to read as usual, be waiting for the next. Oh, the dialogue feels a lot more smooth I think.
| Reviewed By: Fallen Seraph On: February 28, 2007 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to another part of the holy grail war. It does seem like Shiro is getting better at becoming a magus and working on his "Hero" ability. I wonder if the question of Ilya joining the war was completely answer but i guess i will have to take it at face value. I was a bit confuse about the initial character and his point. I guess we have to wait for the next chapter for that one. However, there is another question that needs to be answered. It seems that you put a 'The End' on the last chapter. Is this just saying that you are stopping the story or is that the end to the chapter? Hope another chapter comes soon.
| Reviewed By: Jyoohan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting beggining I have to say. I say read different novels and stuff to help better your writing. The beggining part helped get me into the story and get curious and wonder what's happening who's that guy and what's that servant. Sometimes it's good to keep an identity secret but hint at that person's identety or something close to that. One thing I did not enjoy was Shiro running errands. I don't mean to flame but It felt a little boring, reading about him running errands and such that has no significance to the plot though it is his character. try to make those kind of things short and simple. Other than what I just said above I loved the way you described the scenes in the mountain. The fight scene was awsome and had great originality i think. I can't wait to read another fight scene you will write. And I'm very curious what kind of servant Sigel might have summoned.
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