| "Office Extracurricular" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Ancient Spirit [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2010 18:33 CST
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I quite enjoyed it. You did good work.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 21:17 CDT
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I <3 Jayne Ann Krentz.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 21:16 CDT
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I
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2008 19:15 CST
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very cute. i really liked the banter between them but the story could stand to be edited a little more.
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Title: okay
Reviewed By: True Finder [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2007 03:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The creativity mark is low because it's only, like, the 1000th I've seen so far. Write something with a deeper storyline and real meaning, can't you? If you did, it would be much more enjoyable and not a waste of my time.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 04:02 CDT
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I really liked it. Good job!
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Reviewed By: cactuspd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 09:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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whoa! hot and cute at the same time! president and CEO huh?! so, when can i read about the proposal?
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 00:02 CDT
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That was really good. I enjoyed it. Can't wait for more!
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Title: axel720
Reviewed By: axel720 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 10:23 CDT
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Loved it ^^ Funny when they got caught, too XD I'd love to see more!
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Reviewed By: erivic [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 15:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good but ummm REALLY graphic. and geez youre writing about cardcaptors here. it's rather disturbing to think about sakura and li doing that... but it was quite good. except for the end parts... that was pretty scary... but you kept me reading even though i was horrified :) so quite good. next time maybe pick a more adult anime though... cause sakura's just so... innocent...
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