| "Sweet Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: JadeMoon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic fic! It is one of the best I have ever read! You know what burns in my mind from reading? "Any angel that has lain with the devil can never be loved by anyone". That is fucking awsome! You rock!
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou(Nli) On: March 03, 2007 20:56 CST
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I love it! A little dark and short... but it's good!!! I can't wait to read more of your work. I agree with sglily about Bakura's last words to Ryou... chilling!
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Reviewed By: sglily - nli On: March 01, 2007 21:42 CST
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Yes, disturbing describes this story well. It is well written, getting right to the point, and delivering. I am not a fan of this kind of interaction between these two because it has become almost expected. However, I read this because I like your work. You captured Ryou's despair perfectly. The light fading away as the darkness sweeps in. I don't know what was more disturbing, Ryou having already given up hope only to regain the smallest of sparks then to have it dashed to hell all because of Bakura - or Bakura's cavalier attitude. He's quite the hateful prick in this story. If his intention was to break his light, he did a mighty fine job of it. Oh, and Bakura's last words to Ryou... very chilling.
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Reviewed By: Angelofdeath2006 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 18:37 CST
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Now this was disturbing...in a good sort of way. I liked it. I felt bad for poor Ryou.
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Title: Awesomeness^^
Reviewed By: Ryou's succubi On: February 26, 2007 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually despise oneshots because i can never get into them but that one was so good,poor Ryou. That was really awesome,Every detail just grasped you. Good job,You got me choked up.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 04:19 CST
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Poor Ryou, Bakura is just so cruel physically and emotionally. Good story.
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Reviewed By: LSS On: February 24, 2007 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o...Ok. THAT was much different from MOONLIT METAPHORS. But I liked it just the same! ^_^ so nice job!
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