"Moonlit Confessions" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: the implorer Reviewed By: knightsintodreams On: March 19, 2009 02:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: i liked it so much~!! made me laugh many times throughout ~ i liked how it was basically two men alone on a ship walking back and forth :P and you stayed in character perfectly, i mean it~ veryveryvery well done ^o~ i read alot of these, and this was one of the best :P damnit its only one chapter XD you really did capture both their charcters~ will being adorably dense~ (his kiss would be prudish :P) and all of jack's jackisms~ so......well done~!!!
| Reviewed By: Haven Cell [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2008 22:02 CDT Comment/Review: So cute.
| Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2007 16:00 CDT Comment/Review: You did great! I love how you kept everyone in character. It's so much better when it's belivable! Can't wait for the third movie, coming out this month!
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