"As Long as You're Alive..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 03:09 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Well done. I liked how you were able to add-lib narration, while keeping the flow of the manga chapter intact. You quoted the original dialog correctly, while seamlessly integrating your own. Having it be in Inuyasha's POV also added an extra perspective. All in all, excellent job.
| Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 22:35 CST Comment/Review: very cute fic. I like the POV on Inu. Good job putting the manga into story form
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