| "Something he didn't know" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: MarilynMonroe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a good story, Roxas turns gay, and I like it when Axel gets Roxas on the sink in the bathroom, and when Sora is sitting between Riku's legs watching the gay porn video. All you have to work on is your speling and grammar, other than that kudos, keep working girl, I want to read more, I'm in love with this story.
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 07:24 CST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!I must get more smexy roxasXaxel yaoi action!!!!=@_@=
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Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, that was great! It wasn't even a "lemon" (you know the deal, graphic--NOT implied), I still loved it. Very entertaining. Sequel, please? Maybe do Xigbar's idea. If you won't, I will! Well...maybe.
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Title: ZOMIGAWSH
Reviewed By: Kai_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 21:06 CDT
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YOU SOOOOOOOO HAVE TO CONTINUE!!! *squeeee* X3
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 04:04 CDT
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Reviewed By: Dark_light101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 03:59 CDT
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Reviewed By: bishifangirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 23:20 CDT
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how can they wear tight shirts? I can't breath when I wear tight shirts!!! On a different note, I really liked this. I've been reading a lot of stories lately and in the last one I read wherer one person was coping with turning gay they told their friend who took it badly and then they shot themself....I love it when I'm looking for a good story and finds one that makes me laugh rather than cry and cringe. ^.^
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Reviewed By: cantwrit3 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story was VERY VERY VERY GREAT! Just the speelling and grammar thingy that you have to work on, otherwise though I really liked the story. So, pretty much all you need to do is revise your pieces more...that's all.
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Reviewed By: Midnight_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 23:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was really good i am looking forward to reading more when you post it.
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Reviewed By: anime_lover_kohaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic i love how axel turned roxas gay. anyways i would love to read more please continue!!
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Reviewed By: Kapai [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 15:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay....that was...interesting...oh what am I talking about it was GREAT! You need to work on the spelling errors, and working on the clarity of who's saying what. Basically all you need to work on is sentences and spelling! Otherwise, GREAT STORY-THING!
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