| "Love Me When I'm Gone" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 18:42 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon. This story is really good.
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. I hope you haven't given up on it. Please update soon! *lol*
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope to see an update soon. I really like it so far.
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Reviewed By: kittypaws182 On: March 12, 2007 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this is a really good story. Please update another chapter cause i cant wait to read what happens next Ja Ne Kittypaws182
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 15:23 CST
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what an intresting story. i liked the new chapter. can't wait for a new one!! please update soon
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 01:44 CST
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very interesting. please update soon
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing chapter. And I thank you for the spacing, stuff that looks great on paper gets bunched up on screen. Nice bit of literary angst/foreshadow?/VERY good plot use here. ;) Love where you're going with it and I can see your use of fandom/cannon bits in it. Usually this detracts, but you're making use of it without stepping on feet. Lovely job! And the story is VERY spellbinding and 'want to read more!'. Thanks for the update and hope you find time soon for another. :D cheers!
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Reviewed By: pokiepal [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 22:29 CST
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Just finished reading what you have on here. Keep up the good work Can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your fanfic is one of the most detailed and well written i have ever read. GOOD JOB! I love it so far and i can't wait until you update! please do so soon so that i can get some sleep!! :D
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Reviewed By: Eastsidegeorgiaboy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 00:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best fanfiction that I have read in a long time. Please post your next chapter soon. I am dying to read it.
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Reviewed By: Howling On: February 26, 2007 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^, I love this fic! The angst is interesting and well-written, and the idea that Sesshomaru could go through the well is something I haven't seen before. (Although, admittedly, I haven't read any fics recently.) Can't wait to see what twists you put in next! (Just don't leave me waiting too long, I get antsy)
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Title: Hmmm.
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 22:11 CST
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I used the word 'format' too much in that comment, I hope you know what I meant. The sentence structure within the main body of the paragraphs are very good! You just need to tweek the dialog and scene change/perspective change to make it flow a little more smoothly. It's a very GOOD story and the small irritation of the boxy structure may make it harder to read and enjoy to it's full worth. I'm honestly trying to be helpful here, not condescending or nasty in the least. If you think you might want some help feel free to e-mail me. Or not. Your choice entirely. :D Cheers again to a really wonderful start! *faves*
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Title: Well hells.
Reviewed By: moussajinx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've taken a rather common theme and managed to make it not only 'new' but very intriguing as well. The paragraph format would work better if you spaced the speech portions less sporadically and more in dialog format, but still use the sentence format you have for the main body. You've also got EXCELLENT characterization, even if it may seem Kagome is OC until you realize that years would have changed her even subtly. And now that I've praised your technical skills, I will praise the story itself. Very interesting and intriguing! Also, you've made so many 'where the hell is this going?' inner story-lines I find myself looking forward immensely to the next update. Really enjoyable, and I hope you get more views and that people can ignore the somewhat confusing layout. This could be very VERY good as it's already shown and I hope to see more soon. :D Cheers!
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