| "Sex in the City" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: September 12, 2002 04:22 CDT
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Firaga, I don't mean to be a pain in the ass, but I MISS YOU!! and I'm sure JB does too *sniff*. You said you'd be back in August. Are you still in jolly olde England? If so I hope you come home soon. MMO isn't the same without you *double sniff*. TTYL I hope T_T.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2002 13:38 CDT
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IM ON VACATION!!!!!!!! nooooooo i really really should have brought my disks with me now i feel so bad cause i wrote so many chappies!!! im in freezing london right now (the weather is unusually cold) and i wish i could just SUBMIT stuff but ugh i cant right now - hold on till august please dahls? :) thanks so so much for reviewing![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i had to make the enjoyment factor a 9 =( sorry but THE LEMON WAS TOO SMALL!! wahhh!! even doh you said it was a mini lemon *sniff sniff* ok i'll change it back to 10 hehehehe good chapter.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chapter!! must hurry to the next, my fav couple in a lemon *YaY*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: babygrl216 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2002 10:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahaha Bulma's boyfriend is BLUE? hahaha lol that was totally unexpected! lol i love it! the way you write ie GREAT and this idea is soo origanal! and did 18 have sex in the tank? i must know! this is soo great!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 30, 2002 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That mini lemon was good enough that I would like you to do a long one when you get the chance. The line where 18 thought Krillen's nose was "on the verge of disappearing" was too funny. Very good chappie. Write more ok?[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Goku Go! Man if it wasn't for Vegeta and Trunks, Goku'd be my number one man! Yes Susan I am drooling because I absolutely love this story! Waiting...-JB[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2002 06:26 CDT
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Bulma - Carrie
Chi Chi - Miranda
Marron - Carrie
Eighteen - Samantha
just so you know ;) their characters become clearer as I go along. I hope you guys like it! Guess what? Goku is smart and mature and sexy, and Vegeta, well... he's also smart, mature, sexy, and quite EVIL hehe[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 30, 2002 04:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaawww thanks for the dedication. I'm sure JB is drooling and I definitely love this story. It feels wierd to see Bulma happy with someone else, specially when that someone is Zardon. Veggie is a jerk to break off with someone else on her birthday?! Seems like he needs an attitutde adjustment. Anyway, I can't wait for the update on this one (or the rest for that matter). Grat job!!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 30, 2002 04:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah, this is good. Let me guess - the blue guy is Zardon, right? I hope you break up that situation real quick. Great chap![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2002 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I can't believe no one has reviewed this fic yet!!!!!! I LOVE SEX IN THE CITY AND I LOVE LOVE LOVE DBZ! So It only seems natural that I'll love this fic.
Now let me make sure I've got this straight: Bulma = Carrie, 18 = Sam (my favorite DBZ female is my fav. SITC female,HOORAY!!!), Marron = Maranda and ChiChi = Charalot, right?
Now are the guys going to be like the men on the show and if so Vegeta's going to be the Big and Zarbon will be the Adian, right? Or is it the other way around?
Well I guess I'll just have to wait and see! I can't wait for the next update!!!!!-JB[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2002 09:22 CDT
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haha, I already love this story and there are only three chapters as of now! God, you have to put up another chapter adn quick. please... ^_^[ Request Review Removal ] |
