| "More Than Chance..." Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Elf rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry if my other review had low rating,heh... right now i realice whats for. here is my real rating.by the way im giving you 9 on originality cuz emma is practicaly you or some random thing you saw on and anime.ill put 10 in overrall but please no more sad moments. i know what you are trying to do ,making it deep and romantic ,you get the attencion nicely by the way but keeps,but i think its too sad for me, makes me think you are sad :(, but still im amazed you came up with such a nice story, you are usually better with jokes than with stories :P
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Reviewed By: Elf rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 16:32 CST
Comment/Review:
when leon throws up blood it kinda reminds me of someone who does that too, is it Julio( pj)?
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Reviewed By: Elf rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn is so sad,you have more grammar errors than the last time,the story its too emo ,i like it but Emma cries too much;wtf? was that about a kid with blood in its hand saying mama and dada?
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice ch. although it could have been a bit longer don't u think. ^_^ cya later
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the lemon Mistyque how could you!!!! I hate u sooo much right now. -_-
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Niiicee lemon Mystique. I think I know who the two stars r of ur dream huh *wink* Well awesome ch. can't wait for the next one and good luck with ur grades on thursday. ._.'
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice work, u should try not to space it so much like u do but its ur style anyway. Soo Emma got turned into a dog should've guessed. But I still haven't seen the name Eliana yet. ^^
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chapter, eventhough I don't talk to u anymore doesn't mean I'm gonna leave ur story hagnin' see ya soon. Enjoy the week and a half of vaca.
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Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 15:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If u cut this story short I'll kill u and if u keep making these changes without tellin' me. Nevermind that. Over all I never knew u could be soo hentai....I'm proud of u!^^'
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Animefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awesome fic lil' sis. loved the changes. well I gonna go eat now so cya at school.
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