| "Night To Remember" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: thorny_waves On: June 11, 2004 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blink blink* that was surprising! lol!!! I totally didn't see that one coming!!!
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Reviewed By: Serene Sophistication On: March 25, 2004 15:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was interesting... you really did kill the mood. And well....eww......that's about all I can say is eww....
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Reviewed By: Madhatter_666 On: December 29, 2003 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i give you a three because the ending was pretty good, surprising. But you would have a better story if you put more detail in their intercourse scene. That would add alot more to teh enjoyment of the reader and more of a shock at the end. Overall not a bad job but room for improvement. My email (silvertinefrost05@hotmail.com)
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Reviewed By: Hidama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
woah. That was an interesting, and very surprising ending. My-oh-my. Well, honestly i luaghed at the twisted end. Way to kill a hentai. really. Well no flamer here, just a stunned reader. |
