| "Time for a Quickie?" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 03:40 CDT
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i liked make it quick best of all. i'd rate that the best. overall rating 10, the others were expected... but that one was not, and the pairing was terrific. one, because it was naughtily unsuspected and it was quite fun, and truly believable.
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome! You write such short lemons but they are so awesome! I'm amaze by your writing alot!^^ keep it up, those secret lovers were hawt!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:45 CDT
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Oh, yes! Now THAT was fantastic! Hot and beautiful at the same time. What a talent you have for this couple! Thank goodness, since you keep my love for them alive even when the actual manga storyline continues to disappoint. Can I give Takahashi-san your number?
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur lemons! Please update.
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Reviewed By: inu-geri On: April 02, 2007 11:55 CDT
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THAT WAS SO FUNNY...LMAO
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 13:01 CDT
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LMAO I cracked up when I read the end. Great job for messing with my mind.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 18:33 CDT
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i only believed that last one for half a second, but my expression was priceless during it 0.o;
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Reviewed By: Chase65 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I long suspected Shippo had 'magic' hands. Never thought Kaede would prove it! LOL!!
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I was gonna throw-up at first!!The end made me crack up laughin!!
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHEM.... I began to feel a bit nauseous... KAEDE? SHIPPOU?, then I read the end! I couldn't help but laugh! THAT was funny! However, that gave me a small idea... Have you ever though of writing a fanfic that involved our beloved characters KAG/INU, but also included a scene or two describing the now grown up and mature Shippou and his mate? (Make it RIN, please make it RIN!!) I would devour anything lemony that involved those!! Not that I don't already devour your lemons anyway!! GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: March 15, 2007 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see here, enjoyment factor???I was laughing so dang hard I thought I'd burst. Chapter 3 was just totally gut busting. And after the night I had doing boring, boring laundry...it's 6:30 am now and I'm sooo hilariously giggly I don't know if I can even go to sleep now. Sleep aids???Anyone got some good strong sleeping pills??? I really enjoyed it. Doing more? Yeah, go on, you know you want to write more.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL OMG LMAO That was soo freaking funny!
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: March 14, 2007 03:07 CDT
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This chapter almost made me vomit.... ...then I cracked up laughing when I realized that it wasn't what it at first seemed to be. Well done! XD
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am tellin you now that i never ever get tired of your lemons!! kami that was awesome n so short...which makes it even that better!! =) you did an awesome job like always..keep it up^^
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Title: another story
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your exploring more. cool.
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