| "Time for a Quickie?" Reviews/Comments [ 39 ] |
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Reviewed By: midcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHEM.... I began to feel a bit nauseous... KAEDE? SHIPPOU?, then I read the end! I couldn't help but laugh! THAT was funny! However, that gave me a small idea... Have you ever though of writing a fanfic that involved our beloved characters KAG/INU, but also included a scene or two describing the now grown up and mature Shippou and his mate? (Make it RIN, please make it RIN!!) I would devour anything lemony that involved those!! Not that I don't already devour your lemons anyway!! GREAT STORY!
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Reviewed By: Tana-san On: March 15, 2007 06:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let's see here, enjoyment factor???I was laughing so dang hard I thought I'd burst. Chapter 3 was just totally gut busting. And after the night I had doing boring, boring laundry...it's 6:30 am now and I'm sooo hilariously giggly I don't know if I can even go to sleep now. Sleep aids???Anyone got some good strong sleeping pills??? I really enjoyed it. Doing more? Yeah, go on, you know you want to write more.
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL OMG LMAO That was soo freaking funny!
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Reviewed By: Persephone of Abydos On: March 14, 2007 03:07 CDT
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This chapter almost made me vomit.... ...then I cracked up laughing when I realized that it wasn't what it at first seemed to be. Well done! XD
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
am tellin you now that i never ever get tired of your lemons!! kami that was awesome n so short...which makes it even that better!! =) you did an awesome job like always..keep it up^^
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Title: another story
Reviewed By: fawn of the woods [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 17:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
your exploring more. cool.
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome31 On: March 01, 2007 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i THOUGHT that was hilarious. It was also a good lemon too .. u should put that on Eternal if u already didnt.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: MrsJoey Wheeler [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 16:09 CST
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That was good! I liked it. Your lemons are the best!!!
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 14:41 CST
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Haha, that was one hell of a quickie! :) Well written.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: wildthundakat [not signed in] On: February 28, 2007 12:17 CST
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i read that at work, and couldn't keep from blushing. that was an awsome lemon crammed in such a short amount of writing space. ur lemon was hot hot hot like always. i wish u'd write another one-shot lemon, with miroku and sango
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 08:17 CST
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lol. Yeah, of course...... they don't know. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 05:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome!!! Really!! It's short, but hawt!! And the ending made me smile...yup...homework, ne? ^_^ keep it up girl, n i hope you win!! =)
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 01:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, I do believe that you like writing lemons. Just a guess. Excellent job, by the way. I would guess that you got the challenge from that new group. I plan to join that, by the way. Later, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: angel-up-above-heaven [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 01:23 CST
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^-^ thats like the most shortest story ever! :O but u can make a good lemon story even if it is 1 page ^-^
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 22:15 CST
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WOW!!!! I...um....just...just wow!!! Really good. my jaw dropped and that is hard to make that happen.~Cricket42
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