| "The Farmer's Daughter" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2012 05:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
spelling mistakes... (typo's really) (surprised to find them..) 'of' is an 'or' “He said you have to buy your own uniform by tomorrow of you'll run the class nude.” and 'hic' is 'his' And never once did hic dick leave the warm caverns of her pussy. |
Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: _x_Rawr_x_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 23:30 EST
Comment/Review:
:D Wow that was fantastic! You should make this into a story! It is really good. I love your style of writing :3 Please write more?!!?
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Reviewed By: falcn565 On: October 18, 2007 21:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is awseome. I was wondering though... if you could write a pre-sequal to this fic. I am kinda curious what Kagome was like before she met Inuyasha. And what really set her of to go sleeping around. Why? Because I am like that. You write spectcalualar. Uh..I need a cold shower. So think about the idea of writing a pre-sequal.
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Reviewed By: so sexy On: September 20, 2007 20:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please make another chapter i've been dieing to see whats gonna happen next!!!
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Reviewed By: InusGurl4 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 20:36 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was really good! U should do a sequel or turn it into a story!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 00:58 EDT
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wow... that was.... amazing! your an awsome stupendous righter! unbeliveable, you should make that into a story not a one shot. keep up the great work! unbelivably good.
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 18:36 EDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Lauraa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 12:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy moly. You're officially my hero. That was awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: babydoll09 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh yea, how awesome was that
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Reviewed By: Sassa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 11:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
K-k-k-k-k-keh! OK, so that was a nice story, a juicy lemon (byebye clean'n'dry underwear) and a CLIFFHANGER BEYOND COMPREHESION! You set this hotness up with a time limit - and we won't see the END of it? It could be the drama of the year when it's time for Inuyasha to go back!!!! *gn* *breathe* I really like that you allowed Kouga to be sane. I don't know why he's so often displayed as a bad guy, he's really not. Just...a bit slow on the thinking departement. Can't get around that truth. I want Inuyasha to realise his doubt was because he was picturing more than a fuck from Kagome... but I won't get that, will I? *sigh* Keep up all good work, anything, just bring it on! (Eh, I'm supposed to cheere, not to threat...)
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Reviewed By: pup (off) On: March 23, 2007 09:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... Damn!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
daumn, man! i mean, props for writing an active Kagome! she's normally so passive in all fics (yeah, i do it too) that to see her so dominant seemed almost...weird! LMAO. so well done!!! wow. Take my advice: ride her like the proverbial bull." GREATEST line ever!!!!! wow!! i loved kouga as well, first time he's not been a jackass! ::huggles you and your fiction:: well done, i'm sure kik will love it!!!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 17:19 EST
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Wow! That was really good! And not only the lemon part. The way you led to it and the way you continued the story afterwards is just plain amazing. And what it is about your one-shots that one is always left wishing that it were a full-blown story? Anyway, great work! Keep on!
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2007 16:05 EST
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that was hot! I love your lemons ^^ lol now I sound like a perv XP anyway, will you continue this? or will it definitely be just a oneshot?
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos nsi On: February 28, 2007 10:21 EST
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nothing typical about his farmer's daughter! wonderfully hot and spicey. action like that makes the itching for the hay work while!
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