Title: Full Story
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very cute and sad fic. I only wished that there was more in the actual way of character development and plot. The Kogenta and Riku pairing is my most favourite and preferred but there just wasn't a whole lot of relationship development. I understood why you did it the way you did, the passing of time and all that, but as a result it felt rushed. It was nice to see a story with this pairing and how well you brought out Kogenta's instincts, feelings, and how well you described him. I think you have great potential as a writer and that you'd be great with a longer more detailed story. I hope you write more fanfiction in the future with this pairing and lots of character development! ^^
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