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| "All That Matters" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kazeko Aozora On: September 03, 2009 14:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It was good writing, though, I'll give you that. And they are very IC, about up until the bit with the futon. Then things start getting a bit out of control.
| Reviewed By: Kazeko Aozora On: September 03, 2009 14:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seriously, wtf? That was a perfectly fine oneshot until the random bits of Shonaoi started slipping in. Dare I even say it was a good oneshot before the shonaoi? (Shonaoi--shonen ai that just barely qualifies as non-yaoi.) Seriously, that was completely unnecessary. ...Damn, I should've read the summary more carefully. It just HAD to slip the note about the Hika/Aki down to the next line, didn't it...
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 12:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
*big grin* This was sooo very THEM.
| Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: kk_twin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED it! I thought it was adorable. :) I really loved how you characterized both of them, too. MORE!! (Either of Hikaru no Go or whatever else you'd like to write. ^_-; ) Very entertaining - they were so cute. :D
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