| "Nishi Kaze" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 16:11 CDT
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I feel bad since I haven't read this in awhile, life got in the way... I like how you are presenting the misunderstandings between them =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 21:10 CDT
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Ah, what are you doing to him? He had better be safe and just emo right now or... I don't know. Great chapter as expected =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 15:09 CDT
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you really are taking us for an emotional roller coaster ride, it's alright but now I am wondering how you are fitting the next character in. Thanks for updating =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 08:23 CDT
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What are you going to do to them now? Sorry, but I'm beginning to wonder who's imagination is worse to subject them to, mine or yours? They just... and now... (don't want to give it away) All I can say right now, especially since a lab report is calling my name, is please don't leave them in this state for long, you made me all happy and now... But you still have done a great job, if you didn't I wouldn't be so caught up in it. =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 04:00 CDT
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Yuki is so, can't think of the right words and the closest thing that comes to mind is cute. other than that, why? why? why? I am sorry but that chapter you skipped is going to leave me and my imagination alone and that scares me considering what my imagination can do. Anyways, I loved it as always, I guess you kinda figured that out since I tend to review almost every chapter and I think I may have missed one, but that was due to my computer hating me and me yelling obscenities at it. Sorry about that, good work =)
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Title: Adored!
Reviewed By: kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 23:46 CDT
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That is a great story! I enjoy it a bunch and just had to read it twice ^ ^ The way you have the characters play out and things are just excelent and highly entertaining
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Loved Asuka, since this is the first I've seen of her I can hardly wait for the rest. Just a note, it seems that one of your sentences at the beginning of the chapter repeated itself. Once again great chapter, keep up the good work =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 20:36 CDT
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This is well, "getting really good" in the words of funnyduckie with whom I am in complete agreement at the moment. I loved that Zen just backed off, I am still snickering about it. The holding hands bit was just so cute. I should stop now, and as always Keep it up =)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOoooOOOOooO its getting really good
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 20:38 CDT
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Yea, so at least now I don't have to feel like their hearts are being torn in two. great chapter =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 14:19 CDT
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What are you doing to them? I think I'm going to cry a little now, yes you seem to be making me do that a lot lately, but I get so caught-up with the characters and all... oh well, once again great job and I can't wait for the next update =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 20:41 CST
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ok, that one made me a little sad, but it doesn't matter about that since you've got me intrigued. Keep it up =)
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 18:51 CST
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AWW sweet fic.. LOL.. keep going with it..
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 11:41 CST
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Thanks for the quick update, I like how you've gone from the action to the mystery (though even in the action you gave a sense of mystery). I can hardly wait for the next chapter =)
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Reviewed By: hiya24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm the first to review =) So far this is good, I would like to see where you're going with this as it has caught my interest.
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