| "Centuries of loss" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: IneiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I read this on FFnet, and I read it again here. I love this series! Are you going to update soon? |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! I'm so happy I could hug you!!! Thank you for finally putting Bulma in the story. Hey this is a B/V right? Hehe what am I saying but no really it is right? K don't mind me just really happy that Bulma is finally introduced. I wonder if she's a dragon... It would be cool if she was. * hint* *hint* K yeah..... Please update again soon!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: June 12, 2002 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What happened to Bulma's hair!!!!!!! My goodness! She can't NOT have blue hair! She has black hair? But Vegeta likes her blue hair! He told me so himself! Well, continue, maybe she could dye it or something.....
Anyways, I see the pairings already.... i hope Vegeta and Bulma have a difficult time of it.... You might want to show Bulma's infamous temper...she does still have blue eyes right (how can trunks have purple hair now! Wait! I don't like Trunks with -lavender- hair! COOL! Good idea! Keep her hair black!) Really, with her temper, she's more a red-head. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: June 12, 2002 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! I'm really liking this! Dragons are too cool! So, Vegeta's sort of entered and you end? That's mean! Hurry and update! I want more Vegeta! So, is he golden or is he a different color? (black, red, or dark blue....) Where's Bulma? She with the enemy or the High King's daughter? Oh, the enemy could kidnap her and ChiChi! I like Puar in this! He's a guy in the anime and manga though...but I still like her. Lunch--as a queen. O_o; ok.... Where's Tien? lol |
Reviewed By: Shojo Megami On: June 08, 2002 21:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was looking over my comment, and I just wanted to clear up what I wrote. What I meant to say was that most of the fanfics here are of Bulma and Vegeta, not Goku and Chichi, but to not forget to write about them anyway. Soooo---good chapter! If you keep writing, and finish your story, then this will be an awesome fic! Good imagination!--wow |
Reviewed By: Nikki On: June 06, 2002 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though it's only one chapter I think it's really good, and I want to encourage you to keep writing, because I want to find out what happens. Ummm, put A LOT og Goku and Chichi in there, because they are so sweet together, and besides almost all the stories here are about them, so it's good to see something new...just DON'T leave them out, of coarse! |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 30, 2002 14:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
I see not why this hasn't been reviewed! I personally like it so far! Vegeta as a dragon! Black right? Is he evil, is that why there's a war? More I want my Veggie!!!!!!
More Vegeta and lots of V/B interaction next chapter? Only one bad thing! It was too short! As, a better summary might help. |
