| "All I Really Want For Christmas" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Kisara The Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, the spelling/grammar bit was only rated down because of a few typos I've seen in the first and second chapters, so it was nothing a brief overview won't fix. But: ZOMG! Uke-Riku makes me squee! ^_^ This piece is incredibly cute, and one of the more well written smut pieces I've come across- even if that number is relatively low. XP One of the things I love is how you make Riku so in character even though the situation is about as OOC as you can possibly get. Which means you get a cookie as congrats on a good job! Basically, this has been incredibly entertaining to read so far and I can't wait to read the third chapter you have up. Though, the page also says that this is a work in progress so maybe I have more to look forward to? Hope so!
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Reviewed By: keitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. its turning out to be better than i thought it would be. chapter three is the funniest to me. but then again chapter one is also really good.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: keitochan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
four words for you. I. FREAKING. LOVE. IT!!!!!!!!!!!! you must wright more or i will die!!! but i do think that your idea is good.
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Reviewed By: keitarourashima17 On: March 22, 2007 19:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
pretty good, im wondering what sora is about to do next that he has been satisfied once.....being on top is addictive
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Title: 0-0
Reviewed By: Marstic On: March 09, 2007 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I LOVED IT!!!!!1 That was my fav Kingdom Hearts story! Ohh please write another chapter!! Please!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMFG!!!!
Reviewed By: Chibi Hikiri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 10:53 CST
Comment/Review:
that was.....riku....sora....santa suit!!! my innocense where have you gone!! *crying out to the heavens* nice fic.....i'll watching u!
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