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| "Dragon Ball: Chaotic Future" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: rocketnigga On: March 30, 2007 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is kewl. i love clef, he's my nigga!
| Reviewed By: jeck On: March 25, 2007 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know why you mentioned Trunks in your overall fic summary. So far, it just seems like an OC AU. So, I was severely disappointed to read 5 chapters and it's all about an OC that's really pushing it with the Mary Sue-ness.
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