| "Happy Holidays Inuyasha!" Reviews/Comments [ 122 ] |
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Reviewed By: Reincarnated Miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 10:59 CDT
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This is a very cute story! I spotted a few grammar errors and typos. Your writing style is decent and you're good with keeping the characters IC. Very nice work! ^_^ I can't wait for an update!
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Reviewed By: Kikyo_must_die2 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2007 06:33 CDT
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Awww, the end was cute. Inuyasha was a little OOC but I liked it. Update again soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: hoppen On: June 30, 2007 16:26 CDT
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wow the story is great but inuyasha being so nnice is good but do not make him to nice or even to mean .just make him the way he is.but the story was Amazing.Plz do not make it end so quick .Make it a little longer and I LOVE THE STORY.UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLZ.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You'r fic is totally AWESOME!!!! I LOOOVED READING IT!!!you'r writing is awesome. OMG it's just such a good story. I LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE YOU'R FIC SOON! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! what suspense! YOU ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: GIGGITY On: June 29, 2007 11:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an amazing story, you better finish it soon, but don't make inuyasha hurt kagome anymore on accident please? love the story so far though thanks for writing...typing whatever
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Reviewed By: sufferingkagome [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 01:40 CDT
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write more plz
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Title: correction
Reviewed By: Inukunsgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 20:02 CDT
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Um...if you guys read it more carefully you'll know that he's getting her a bow made especially for her... *snickers* You guys are too funny. Plus I wouldn't think that inuyasha would know what a wedding ring is. I don't think they had wedding rings in the feudal era unless you were rich.
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Reviewed By: hoppen On: June 28, 2007 19:40 CDT
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reminder NOT A RING ,because if you do the story will be to ordinary.
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Reviewed By: hoppen On: June 28, 2007 19:38 CDT
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the last chapter was not bad.oh yeah about the gift make sure it is not a ring.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 18:45 CDT
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WOOOHOOO! I'm so excited! I LOVE SHIPPO! (please, do not ask) Ahem. That was like, so totally awesome! (I hope Inuyasha also gets her a wedding ring)I can't wait! Update!
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Reviewed By: hofpd On: June 27, 2007 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do not stop writing i love you work.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 09:47 CDT
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Woot! nice job! kinda sad though. I mean, the fact that Kagome might have to end up killing Inuyasha is terrible! More about the others though. and i agree, SessXKag fics are evilly freaky! *no offense to people that like them...* But please update!!!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 13:28 CDT
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WOW!!!! this is great! KAWAII!!!! PLEASE update faster! Its SUMMER!!!
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Reviewed By: DECENDER On: June 18, 2007 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FUCKING KICKS ASS!!!!!!! please finish post as fast and as good as you can. which turns out is pretty good. i love the there but not compleatly realtionship style of your storie. it dosentt drag it out or emmedently go for the hardcore. You seem to make the characters work for it. just like real life. i wouldent change a thing in your writing style.you just might be as good as the great carro. if youv heard of him.everyones paired up properly each having the right personalitys and dominence in the realtionships. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mineygirl12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:00 CDT
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I really,realllllly liked this story.Please don't stop writing it. Please finish.
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