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| "One night Stand." Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Woof.
Reviewed By: Metalic [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eh, I like the style of writing for this chapter, a hell of a lot in fact, but I'm not sure if it'll go stable for an entire lengthly story, or even a short story. It's very unique, the style I mean, but it may get old and perhaps even aggravating for a reader further through. Readers like detail and they like it to paint a picture, but they also like to quickly find out what happens next. Try to keep away from large, long, meaningless details and stick to smaller, less noticeable ones. Don't get me wrong, the style is great for a 'here and there' or just for the prologue or first chapter, but you may be working too hard for less value if you use it through out the whole story. Then again I don't know what your style plans are in the first place X3, just making suggestions.
| Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: CoolCritique On: March 12, 2007 09:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I only gave you a 9 because it was so short! I hope you're planning on writing more of these stories! Quantity over quality I've always said, and this is indeed very good!! I love the effect you've made with the repetition of words. It gives the story more of a desperate feel to it. :)
| Reviewed By: IncestLvr On: March 08, 2007 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the style very much my freind. It it's quite different from your usual, but it's quite refreshing. Keep up the good work :3
| Reviewed By: Phaedra Rin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked the style, with the repitition of words. :) Very nice.
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