| "The Wolves Night" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 16:16 CDT
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o gosh that was sick! poor kagome! to witnesss that o gosh it sends shivers down my spine...and thats why it was great! sick...but great
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Title: The Wolf's Night
Reviewed By: DemonScrewer101 On: August 02, 2007 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a good story. Kagome, in this story is simple minded because she was so shocked to see Kouga and his crew eating a deer in a vicious manner.Being animals what did she expect them to do cook it. But I still liked the story.
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Title: Eeek! Mmmm, now I'm hungry!
Reviewed By: Come Hither [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Have you ever considered a career as a narrator for Animal Planet?
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Reviewed By: Ichabod25 On: March 04, 2007 16:56 CST
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With focusing on the darker side of youkai and there more animal counterpart you have put together a wonderful and dark story. I commend you for it. Good Luck on your future writings.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 13:44 CST
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brilliant! you really show kagome's ignorance to her surroundings and her determination to treat everyone as she wants to see them. she disregards the advice of others and forces her ideals onto inuyasha, wanting him to be stronger and walk away...when she finally gets to view what the results of that could be. these are animals in human form and kouga emphasized that with the playing with and killing of the buck. he understands as little about kagome as she about him, and perhaps (i'd like to think) now she will ask about more about those surrounding her that merely look human. beautifully done and powerful.
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Reviewed By: Fyrloche [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My dear young lady, you have just established yourself as an author to be reckoned with. This is an extraordinary piece of work. I look forward to your continued growth as a writer if this is any indication of the quality of work that you will turn out. And I believe it is. Take care, Fyrloche.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2007 03:57 CST
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Interesting little story. Inuyasha's thoughts about loving her and not telling or showing her were very sad, though. Not quite sure how they fit in with everything since he didn't act on them, unless it was just to make the whole fic sadder. Kouga's thoughts about how he would treat Kagome like a Queen were really well done. Of course, now the whole Inuyasha/Kouga dynamic is thrown off for the rest of the series since she will never see Kouga in the same way again. HA!! LOL!! Nice piece of writing and "food" for thought.
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