| "Battle of the Bad Boys" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Xazis On: June 16, 2010 10:31 CDT
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I like your characters. I'm always a fan of Bad!Sora, and I like that you have a Seifer that is closer to his FF8 self. I never liked what KH did to him. The plot is amusing. I'm always a little wary of high school fics, because sometimes the steretypes get taken to painful extremes. Here, you're just starting with something really different. I can't see many normal high school sterotypes in what is basically a correctional institution. I liked the explanation of why some characters were paired with thier mentors. Having Demyx cancel out Axel's fire is a great reason. Also, I'm really amused that Roxas is with Marluxia. That has so much potential for mayhem. Absolutely lovely Riku/Sora interaction. I would expect that their in-school interaction will be limited, so I hope they'll have more out-of-school meetings.
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Title: WoW!
Reviewed By: anarie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2010 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best storys I have read in a long time! please update soon!!! I will be anxiously awaiting your next installment!
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Reviewed By: xXxSolitaxXx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2008 01:01 CST
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Title: please write more....!!!
Reviewed By: Zesti Momo On: October 21, 2008 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, I usually get bored when I read a fanfic, but when one actually keeps me focused, that means it is VERY good. Please continue or maybe even post this on Fanfiction.net, where you will mostly get reviews. I love how Axel kept finding his face on the desk, lol.
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Reviewed By: anime_grl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 01:28 CDT
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AHHHHH!! I Have to Wait for 15 more peopl to review?!!! Noo!!!! TT-TT
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Reviewed By: jyanx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2007 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your defiant and ballsy Sora. It;s nice to see someone who dosen't write him as such a whiny little whimp. I can't wait to read more.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Takayu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ I like it. But there were just a couple of things out of place/misspelled. *squirms* XD Just because you don't get a lot of reviews for a story doesn't mean that no one's reading it or likes it...they're just lazy :D I mean, isn't there a "hit" counter or something somewhere...I'll have to check... I could be a beta-reader for you if you want. But I really think that you've got something going here! And I know exactly what you mean about the writer's block! Darn you, imagination! You must work harder! And darn you too, creativity! Taku: Aren't those the same? Me: What? Are they? Taku: I dunno, that's why I'm asking you. Me:...oh well. Gah! And I wanna see some more Leon! Taku: Tidu-Leon? Me:...I've never thought of that before. Nah, I'd like some hot and spicy Sephy-Leon with a light taste of Cloud. Taku: Go to Burger King then. Me: That's mean. XD Later!
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Reviewed By: KGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the story and all, but the formatting was confusing to me. Mabe, it was too much detail, or mabe it was the fact that you used future tense when you wrote this. Mabe, I'm just pickey. And, there's a typo. When, Sora's group first arrives at the school, you mention that Cloud is with them. He's with Riku isn't he?
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Reviewed By: kondha On: April 18, 2007 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah haha~ i liked it alot. i didnt really have any problems with it~ and Sora just.. walking away from riku made me laugh. makes me want mooooore~~ when i saw the "20 reveiws" thing, it made me want to faint. is this on fanfiction.net ? you're more likely to get more reveiws there, it gets WAY more traffic. *you have 19 reveiws to go* haaa, good luck. ~kondha (rukia.250free.com)
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