| "Teardrops" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Abigal On: June 22, 2013 12:33 EDT
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YOU HAVE TO KEEP WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!!! This story is beyond good! When I got to the last chapter that was posted, I knew it wouldn't be the ending, but I had to keep reading anyway. PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE MORE!!!!! |
Title: I knew there was a reason to hate Relena
Reviewed By: creotia_flayier [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2009 18:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love what you have written here! I enjoy evrything, but Heero having to suffer abuse again. I knew that there was a reason that I was starting to hate Relena. When written correctly, I cannot stand her. On this aspect of your plot development, I applaud you with a standing ovation. On the others, I just want to cry! Please do tell why you continue to have Duo ignore Heero in the romantic sense? I have another suggestion, instead of just country music, try having Heero be versitile on the guitar. I think that said person knowing different types may make that trait a little more appealing. I suggest trying music from either Oleander, "I Walk Alone," to Collective Soul, "Run." Not saying anything bad about the choice, but more people might enjoy the change. I do enjoy everything!! I am sorry for the mouthful, but when I enjoy something that is well written this is what happens. I do have one thing to tell you, this is getting better. Just please let the Relena bashing continue!! She is just bland and drab! Great story, awaiting the update!
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Title: Brilliant
Reviewed By: lilkami On: November 07, 2008 14:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this fic. It has an amazing plot, and the characters are so well written. I am a huge Heero fan, so anytime he's going through a tough angsty time, I'm instantly drawn in. The story is great, and you can't help but become obsessed. Can't wait for more
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Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2008 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! You didn't abandon the story. I give applause to whomever inspired you to continue on and to your proofreader Rachel. Thanks to them, and ultimately you, I now have another reason to procrastinate at work. Keep up the good work. I really enjoy the unique story and the interaction of the characters. I can't wait to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: jeangreymullinsjr. On: October 29, 2008 03:01 EDT
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OMG, you have to update soon! I wonder what's going to happen when Relena circulates that picture at the end; if it was Relena. Poor boys! And there seems to be no break for lonely Heero! Throw him a bone please! Can't wait to read the next one
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2008 00:48 EDT
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hi snukems. welcome back - hugs - loks good.
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Reviewed By: GataAgua [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2008 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did a good job, I'll be happy to read the next one.
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Reviewed By: GataAgua [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 05:59 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you update soon, I enjoy this story and would like it to develop further.
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Title: Chapters 1-3
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 23:35 EDT
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I have to admit, I thought your story was very unique and intriguing. Not only are the characters interesting but you've also got just the right amount of angst. ^^ It's a fine balance and you do it well. I love the 1x2 pairing and I await the chapter when it all falls into place but seeing Heero secretly pine for an oblivious Duo is quite entertaining to watch. IF there really is a boyfriend it certainly will be interesting when they meet. ;) I do suppose that if Heero showed he was gay to Relena then she would back off. He could always kiss Duo, lol. That would, however, probably cause a lot of problems for Quatre and Trowa. =P They have such a delicate situation. As for any suggestions I have they would be to improve on your grammar more than your spelling. Both are important but I found that you had more grammar than spelling errors. To tidy things up you could get rid of those contest chapters where there was no story. Other than that I think you're doing a great job. I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: forever_rootless [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 15:24 EDT
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this is shaping up to be one hell of an emotional rollercoaster ride for the guys!! im looking forward to reading more of it.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 03:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 02:45 EDT
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Huh. It's a cool start to this story. So, I guess it's about to get disturbing. Hmmm, maybe not the most wholesome material, but sometimes you need to exorcise your own soul through a medium. Story telling is a hell of a lot better than killing the people responsible in this society. Neh. Anyway, keep writing, and all that stuff. Later.
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 21:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oo the suspense. I like the story so far! More please. :)
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Reviewed By: camillian On: March 05, 2007 01:23 EST
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love the way it's beginning! please update again soon!
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