| "A Slanted Line" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: az On: April 19, 2009 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for reasoning behind plot development! But "logically" drove me a little crazy. I also thought the Tanaka-Honey-Haruhi hanging out could have used a little more depth. Pretty great over all.
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Reviewed By: silvermoon maru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2009 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was great!! You should write about when they get back to school and other people reactions it 'll add some more drama and romance , that would be very interesting. Awesome lemons.. i was really wondering how they relationship would be. You are a really good writter =)
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 02:27 CST
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i love this story and wish that there was more to it. how does the host club react to the three of them being together? what about her father and the twins parents? please write more.
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Reviewed By: sveta89 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 21:25 CDT
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great story 5 stars
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Title: plz make another story
Reviewed By: The Silver Rose On: August 15, 2007 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank u soooo much i've been looking everywhere for a good haru/twins fic but there are so few good ones much less ones with chapters so u have no idea how much i love this story thank u so much i hope u make another can't wait
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 01:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed the ending to this, especially with the way haruhi's practical side coming out in the end. lol. this is definitely a fave, i'll have to read it again I think.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 05:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhh i definitely enjoyed the last chap, so goodddd.
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Reviewed By: me. haha. On: June 13, 2007 09:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please tell me this is not the end. your status says 'complete' but your chapters say 'to be continued'...which one is it? *sigh* I do wish this is not the end. I rarely, if not never, read fics that are unfinished, so please continue this soon...you are doing such a marvelous job! I'm pretty sure sleep will be a hard task for me tonight. >.
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh .. Oh my.. Happy glazed look. Oh that lucky lucky girl. I really do hope you have a bit more of this some where.. :Fans Face: The story is really lovely and the fruit was quite yummy. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow very hot, i need a cold shower now, such an evil cliffy how could u.
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good. i really did feel for haruhi in the first few chapters. The pace of the story is perfect as well.
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Reviewed By: myrrdinfalcon On: March 18, 2007 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful, well thought out piece of fanfiction. Keep up the great work. I have long been a fan of your writing and I think this is your best work to date.
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 18:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Makes happy squeaky sounds.. =^_^= Mew! this was sooo cute! I very much loved the fluff going on here.
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