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| "Looking Glass" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Blue Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:55 CDT
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i admire your writing you are very good at it. keep up the good work!
| Title: haunting
Reviewed By: qwaynt On: March 11, 2007 13:24 CDT
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Oh, this is so hauntingly wonderful. I like the way you leave the reader wondering is it real or is it insanity. Then again, I can't help but push it a bit further and think he's really dead and this is hell. Only Kakarott's eldest died in battle as a Saiyan deserves. Like the irony of that statement. That has to be a painful comment to make. A well done and very powerful one shot.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2007 03:41 CST
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Ah, that was so beautiful and sad (I need Prozac now TT_TT). I don't know how to explain it, but it had a real weight to it, a soul heaviness-- I could truly feel Vegeta's desperation and utter weariness at the world. The ending is ambiguous, but I don't believe Vegeta had the real Kakarot at the end. At least he was able to find some measure of peace through his misery. Nice job.
| Reviewed By: Onnafied [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was amazing. I was enthralled when I read it. You, as always have done an exellent job. There is no way to describe how powerfull and magnificent this piece is. The only other person that I can think of who had me so captivated was Alithiel. You are extremely talented and I can;t get over how deep this was, so much so that this review will most probably an unhelpfull one, but I just had to write something. You have once again conveyed the emotions in the fic superbly, there is nothing bad that I can say about this - it's just so powerfull. Wow! Keep up the good work and hopefully, I'll have written a better review in the next couple of days
| Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 05, 2007 15:49 CST
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This was the perfect length, and you did a really nice job with Vegeta's train of thought. Everything just flowed from one idea to the next, peaking with the end. One suggestion: I would add another "fight" to the line "fight with or for" so it reads fight with or fight for." Normally I would say such duplication is unnecessary, but I think here it would add to the emotion.
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