| "Aniki I want things the way they used to" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: armybrat14 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 15:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
really good :) i think u should each pair the brothers with an OC. so much can go with a story when there's an OC!! keep up the good work :)
|
Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 19:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
kawaii... Brotherly love. Can you make the chapters longer?
|
Title: Good job!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Is there gonna be more? If there is I can't wait to read it! :D
|
Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: The Midnight Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2007 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good so far! I can't wait to read the next chapter. ^_^
|
