| "Switching Roles!!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RadioActiveRedhead [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2008 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, good idea but really you should make sure that your 'Thoughts.' Are put as if someone was talking. Also you should make it so that whenever someone speaks (in or out of their mind) that you press the return button, separating the "speech" or 'Thought' from the other writing. For an example, check out one of my stories. They're not the best but they have an OK outline and they are easy to read and look at. Make sure your story's chapters aren't just bunched together and that you have paragraphs. Remember! A paragraph is 4-5 sentences...then you press the enter button before writing again. I hope I helped.
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Reviewed By: goddeskagome213 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good!!! I hope Kagome kills that bitch kikyo and makes inuyasha pay for fucking her. Update soon ok!!!
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Reviewed By: Bluemist queen213 On: April 11, 2007 15:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope that you making Inuyasha pay for fucking that bitch Kikyou. Its good so far so continue writing it ok.
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_girl_kagome2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
i HATE KIKYO SO I DIDNT READ THE LEMON BETWEEN INU AND KIK BUT I LIKE KAGOME AND INUYASHA IS IT GOING TOO BE A INU AND KAG. BUT KAGOME ROCKS AND NEEDS TOO SHOW INUYASHA A LESSON. NO MORE KIKYO AND INUYASHA RIGHT PLZ NO
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