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Reviewed By: Travis2890 On: March 22, 2007 14:43 CDT
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Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10

Comment/Review:
This isn't bad, ok the plot was pfredictable given the hentai theme but the loneliness endured by this guy and being annoyed by Stallion are some of the reasns I like this. You have managed to have the story rely on something then this guy's dark intent with millie, which wasn't that graphic thankfully.

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