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"Better Than Milk" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 02, 2008 16:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Even though it was a tiny bit short, I loved it. Smex galore is always good when Train and Svenny-baby are involved XD
 Reviewed By: Train Fan13  On: August 21, 2007 22:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well it's not too bad. I find Train a little out of character, but that can be fixed with a little tweaking. The sex could be drawn out a little longer too I think. It's just my opinion though.
 Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 11, 2007 17:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hehe... Roy Mustang's just hot... LIke fire... I know, bad joke. XD Hehe. Nice work by the way, though (not to sound rude) it could use a little touching up... Then again, every story can get better.

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