| "Seeds of Destruction" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Seto Takahashi
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2009 14:14 CST
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I'm surprised that Only me and another guy gave you a review. The truth is I was also Hollowbankai which was what I used before I registered. I am really grateful that you finally posted something to this wonderful story. I have really liked how everything was set up and how it was shown and not told how Ichigo and Inoue felt. I really anticipate another update and hope that you don't make us readers wait for months without an update then bust out with six. I would rather you put an update whenever you finished a single chapter so that my reading can stay consistent and I don't get lost in what I am reading. Again keep up the good work and don't give up. I have a tendency to give up because I don't get reviews at all so that's why I am giving you some. It is good to know that people appreciate what they are reading and that people also understand where their writing strengths and weaknesses are. As for me I would say that the strengths are that you are able to show emotion and have a great imagination. The weaknesses are minor but if you want to know it's simply putting too much detail into insignificant scenes making the pace of the story slow at times and also the spacing would work better if it were double spaced since it strains the eyes when its not. That's really all when it comes down to weaknesses so I would say that your a strong writer. And thank you for the story I greatly appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Seto Takahashi On: February 19, 2009 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chap. When r u going to do the rest of the chaps. I also wonder at what time frame you believe it would be until the epilogue. I want to see a happy ending so That's why I am asking. And also I like the whole Ichigo training thing. I always enjoy that but I don't know why. And also Orihime needs to get nailed to the bone by the real Ichigo and you know what I mean. Also Try and put group orgies if you can. I think that would make for a funny turn out ne? well its good to read another chap after TWO DAMN YEARS. Well I was just kidding on that part it was more like two months or three. See how impacient I get.
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Title: Seto Takahashi
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
I forgot to mention I do think you are a god or goddess since I don't know your gender. And I just realized that this story is already on my favorites list. Shit people need to read this story. I feel like a pioneer reading the new generation of writing. SAY HELL FUCKING YEAH FOR SUSPENSEFUL DRAMA TRAGEDIES. I feel so connected since I am writing stories based on sorrow and despair. However don't read what I write I don't feel safe revealing my better writing pieces since I am afraid people might take my ideas so whenever I get writers block I do fanfics and anyway theirs nothing here that I wrote I think. Scratches his head because he's an idiot who doesn't know where he's posted.
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Title: Seto Takahashi
Reviewed By: sportstud [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's about damn time. Just kidding. But seriously I am so thrilled. I FINALLY GET TO CONTINUE READING C: Seriously though sorry to hear about your arm. However that still doesn't cover you for two years so you better finish this in less then two years or I will be personally tracking you and hunt you down to hound you to finish this no lie. I am so estatic I'm going to put this on my favorites list because it really is my favorite. However, DAMMIT Rukia and Renji get action while Ichigo is in a pile of shit emotional mess. Damn Inoue needs to get nailed anally at least four more times before this is done.
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Reviewed By: Seto Takahashi On: February 15, 2009 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I got a question. Are you dead or in a coma? Come on you got one of the best stories I've ever read for fanfiction PERIOD and yet you don't finish it. Dammit if you don't want to finish it then I WILL. I'm growing tired of waiting for your next update. DAMMIT IT'S BEEN TWO YEARS!!! I hate it when someone has something that is a masterpiece and not finish it. THAT'S BULLSHIT!!!
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Reviewed By: hollowbankai On: January 27, 2009 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is relatively a good score since I don't give high ratings often. I really enjoy this story and hope you continue it and finish it. Its sad though. No happy ending but, my stories are like that too a lot worse actually in terms of tragedy.
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Reviewed By: mangekyouperv [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2007 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u ARE A GOD THIS WAS A AWESOME FANFIC KEEP UDATING PLZ THIS STORY IS AMAZING
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