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| "Of Two Worlds" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: sonic_boom8780 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2009 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate bullies...they are really jerks. What grade is the main character in, i mean not many people can fit in lockers. This story could work...except the fact that there's only one chapter..if you write more to answer the questions you've already made us(the reader) ask themselves you'll be fine. Is it a ghost or something more sinister? Did the character die or are they dreaming? What will come out of this encounter with this light? ....i'm just curious to know, so hopefully you'll write more.
| Reviewed By: PyroMonster On: August 17, 2007 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Update. Good Story.
| Reviewed By: Dark_Angle666 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that's really good! It sounds so exciting...I can't wait for more!
| Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 08, 2007 17:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome start, got me hooked on the 1st hapter, cant wait to see what happends next :D
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