| "Heart to Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Geez You're Good!
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 09:51 CDT
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God, you're soooo good with keeping each characters...well...character! Zero sounded really good and so did Captain. And now I'm just wondering, who are you going to do next? Maybe you could do a Zapper/Grappler? (if that would even work out ^_^0) Just a suggestion. But before I get off topic, this was fantastic and keep the good stuff comin'! :D
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 19:37 CDT
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Zero's lines were very poetic. And Captain was... well Captain. Nicely done. No Baku huh? Either way nice job.
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 08:56 CDT
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*sputters at Gaara's comment with bondage* O_O;;; Well... that's one mental image to ruin another... @o@ Okay... Yes, a very touching chapter. I'm guessing it took place before Baku had arrived to Neotopia. n_n; The nightmares about Lacroa must still haunt him... naturally. 6_6 As always, love to read more. :3
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 08:51 CDT
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I'm glad you exist Zero! *huggles him tightly* You are so cute and nice and stuff!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 10:42 CDT
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AWW! That was cute! The bondage!
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Title: It's About Time! :O
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 10:31 CDT
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It's about time that Shute and Baku got some bonding time ALONE! I mean, it's always usually Captain or even Zero who gets some bonding time with the kid, don't you agree? But anyways, great job! The grammar was superb and the touchy moments weren't too corny at all. Keep up the great work Silever Bells my friend! ^_~
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Whitetail [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 08:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the original type of pairing here! Baku and Shute? Who would have thought!? Very nice, I enjoyed very last word of it
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 14:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too cute! I love the bonding here, and you still got the characters down pretty darn well. And yeah, there needs to be more bonding between Baku and Shute. There's even been bonding beween Zero and Shute for crying out loud! But yeah, this was really an adorable fic. ^_^
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Reviewed By: FennFeatherDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 23:18 CST
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Sweet short fic. I like it.
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Reviewed By: curly211 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 22:10 CST
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It makes me all gooey with good feelings inside. I feel sooo much better now after a tough day. Thank you for that!!! *hug*
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 19:57 CST
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AHHH I loved it. :D I loved it all. 'Merry war' is like my new favorite combination of two words LOL. XD
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Title: (melts happily)
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 19:54 CST
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I feel better now. Not only do I have great friends here, but I also don't have as many sucky immediate-vicinity friends as I thought, so I'm feeling a lot better. (cyber hugs) Great story.
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Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 17:43 CST
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Sweet stuff you got here! I always enjoyed your stories and they just keep getting better and better with you! Make another one too and make us Gundamaniacs proud!
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