| "Loves Company" Reviews/Comments [ 64 ] |
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 20:48 CDT
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Akita, Akita, Akita...an ulcer?....poor baby...when you get up to feeling better, I'll take you out for some Baskin and Robbins, my treat....*Psst...whose stephanie...*blushes*...walks away mumbling about having to reread the story...catti
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 20:36 CDT
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....WHAT?! What the hell are you thinking?! I hate you! Evil evil EVIL! I CAN'T TAKE THE STRESS OF ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER, DAMN IT!!! ....Sorry. But it's true. I'm very stressed right now and I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! Update? PLEASE?! Well....wait until Kita's okay and all, 'cause I loves da Kita-chan....but....UPDATE!!! *sobs* Pleeeeeaaaaaaase!!!
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 21:34 CDT
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XD Eeeep! JJ reminded me sooooooo much of me at the end of that chapter.... There's nothing left in this house that I haven't tripped over at one time or another, and I think I've hit our floor so many times that I've bruised it and damaged it beyond repair.... Anyhow! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, fluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuff!!! ....Tastes like cotton candy! *is choking on the fluff* I looooove fluff! Okay, very cute chapter, I am pleased. Now go write more. I know something bad HAS to happen next chapter, because Fake writers just don't go two whole chapters without something going awry.... I wanna find out what the "something bad" is! Now....WRITE. Pweeeeaaaase?
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Reviewed By: dubhghall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 13:19 CDT
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Bar or bed - what's the difference? ;D No, honestly. I really like this chapter. It has a bit of everything - it is sweet, hot and even a little angsty. *thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 23:34 CDT
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YEAH....monkey sex....oh yea...love it..catti
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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You have a really good story here... I'm so sorry for only reviewing now! I've been reading since your first chap, but I haven't had time to review at all! (I still don't, but my conscience is catching up with me...) I love how you incorporate the suspence and the romance while interchanging their emotions! Wow to you. Please keep up the good work, it is much appreciated!
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Reviewed By: dubhghall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:09 CDT
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I LOVE bar scenes - any scenes in bars (don't ask - I honestly don't know why ^^) - and I definitely like how this story is developing. The plot thickens slowly but surely - and that I like even more. Thank you for a very well written chapter - with just the right amount of fluff and deliciously funny ending. =D
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Title: TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!
Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 12:38 CDT
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Kita-chan, Subu-chan? You two are wicked, you know that right? Poor confused Drake! I wish him luck! For you two ... I give thee um... (something without a lot of sugar, something without a lot of sugar, something without a lot of sugar....^.^') A bagful of Jelly Bellies .....
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 11:46 CDT
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Oh for the love of all that is holy (including my jeans)...WE WANT HOT MONKEY SEX!!!!!!!!!WE WANT HOT MONKEY SEX!!!!!WE WANT HOT MONKEY SEX!!!WE WANT HOT MONKEY SEX and chocolate....catti
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 23:10 CDT
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Yaaaaay! ^^ Happy happy joy joy. But now I'm dying to find out what happens next, and I'm dying for MORE fluff. Yes, I'm like a drug addict. The more fluff I get, the more fluff I want....so GIVE ME MORE. Pleeeeeeaaaaaaase? Oh, and you sooooo got the "even when I'm wrong, I'm right" thing from Meet the Robinsons. You did, you did, you DID. XD All right, I loved this chapter, and I'm dying to see more. Thank you for cheering me up! You guys do have a knack for that...
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Reviewed By: dubhghall [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 07:03 CDT
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*sneaks in through the back door* [enter loads of apologies about not reading and reviewing earlier here] Ahem. I finally read the first four chapters and am impressed. This story's flow is great - a good mix of JJ and Drake's private life and the case they are investigating. I think I even like it a little bit better than the first part. ;) BTW, I really liked that you didn't let JJ and Drake go all the way (not yet, anyway ^^). Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 01:01 CDT
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my blonde roots are showing and am sooo confused but will expect my confusion to end at next chapter, ne?....oh just got in a prescription...heart you go Suba-chan, the valium you wanted hop 120 tablets will get you through to the next chapter if not let me know and will get you some more..giggles...having sex with a drug rept has its perks...giggles...oops did I say that out loud?...catti
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Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 21:42 CDT
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Yaaay! You wrote a bar scene for me! But....there was no fluff. This makes me sad. Give me fluff. XD Okay, in all seriousness....excellent chapter! But suspense gives me heart attacks....I swear, my heart is clogging as I type this.... Well, I'm not gonna write a long review, because I swear, my finger feels like it's broken right now, and I don't want to type with it, so....I'm just gonna go with a happy "EXCELLENT" and ask you to update....
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Title: ....Daaaaaamn yoooouuuu....
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 12:33 CDT
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*tears up* This one's for Hana-chan.... *sobs* I love you guy!!! But....DAMN YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS!!! *picks up a crowbar* Oh....you're wondering what I'm doing, Kita-chan? Well, it's quite simple, dearie. I'm just going to hit you with this crowbar until you update. ^^ But if you update, I'll, er....erm....I'll....NOT beat you with a crowbar! (I was about to mention cookies, but....that didn't seem safe....) Now....off to the updates with you! (And what's this about Catti hating herself? She shouldn't hate herself! If she's so loyal to Kita and Subu-chan, she should not hate herself 'cause she's okay in all our books! ^^ Yes, Catti, be nice to yourself!) All right, you've listened to my babble enough, and since none of it was constructive criticism, I should probably just shut up and let you UPDATE!!! *pokes Subu-chan in the back with the crowbar and herds her and Kita-chan to the computer* Go on. Go.
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Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 08:35 CDT
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Slowly peaks out from under self-hatred and denial of age....washes away the tears....sniffs...poor JJ and Drake they can never have a night of monkey sex....giggles a little...monkey sex...love the phrase...gonna use it because it brings a smile to my face...beats down jealousy...hana-sama is sooooo cool....catti wishes she could do story in dedication to Akita...but all she can do is offer candy...self loathing continues....
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