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Reviewed By: bronze_ribbons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2008 23:43 CDT
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I've enjoyed reading this and "Misery" - I'm a huge sucker for hurt/comfort to begin with, and it's been a delight to watch the guys at the 27th + Bikky keep Dee out of trouble, to see them working together to circumvent Rose, and the other scenarios you've depicted. I also really dig getting glimpses of Jim Campbell (he may be a minor character in the Matohverse, but I have a crush on him anyway *grin*).
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Title: catti
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 16:01 CDT
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Psst...*quietly walks into room, holding a 5lb box of candy for Kita-chan and Valium for Subu-san*...HEY...long time no write...
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Reviewed By: dubhghall [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 14:05 CDT
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Sometimes I'm so blind it's not even funny. Even though I checked here frequenly I didn't notice the new chapter until tonight. Sorry! *hides in a corner* Anyhow. I like the light tone of this part; imagining our heroes chatting and gossipping in the hall made me smile. And Drake and JJ are just too adorable. Thank you for this very nice update. I'll be waiting impatiently (and a bit more alert) for the next chapter. :D
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Title: Breakfast of Champ
Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This wastoo funny, I like the way their new love is coming along. "who died in your wheaties" had me laughing so much I had tears in my eyes because I have never heard that before. with everyone being champions to the public it really fits and you have made Dee a real ass but still a loveable one. I don't want to have to kick start you again the story is just to great to wait so looooong again.
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Title: You were missed
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 15:05 CST
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Now I just wanted to add separate from my review that I hope all is well and that although I would selfishly like for you to update everyday, life tends to interfere in the creative process. Good luck with everything and there's only room for improvement in all things.*GLOMPS* WELCOME BACK KITA/SUBU. You were really missed you. Daxemon
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Title: YAAAAAAYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2008 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FANGIRL REVIEW BEGINNING IN T-MINUS 10...9...8...7...6...5...aw hell I can't wait that long. I'm actually misting up here. I was so frightened that you had completely given up on "Loves Company". To calm myself I kept rereading it over and over and over and over and over and over and over and over.....again. Hey Ryo, Drake and Jim I missed you so. Y'all look so cute chatting in the hallway. Good job on making Ryo blush there Jim-bo, made up for him making Drake blush. ha-ha."...JJ hanging from Drake's neck like some sort of outsized human necktie." I love that imagery, it's so adorable. 'less than fresh' and "Considering that Rose usually looks like he's expecting to be accosted for a GQ cover-shoot at any time,...." Rose to a tee...LOVE IT. To wrap up JJ and Drake are so cute together. Please don't turn my world upside down again. I was in such despair...*chibi eyes*...{hope this guilt trip is working and you update soon}. Thanks for coming back. Daxemon
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Title: THEY LIVE!!!!
Reviewed By: Hana_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 19:05 CST
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OMG!!! *glomps* I've been worried sick about you guys!!! I've been freaking out.... I was like, "Did they die? Are they mad at me? Did Kita drop the computer out the window? WHAT IS GOING ON?!" (XD Love you, Kita!) But you're back now and life is good. ^^ And I'm very pleased with this chapter--it was cute and it was a nice break from all the stress of the story, if you want my opinion. But....now I'm all on edge wondering what happens next. So update soon, okay? Oh, and....I'm really sorry to hear about all the stress, you guys! Lemme know if there's anything I can do to help. ^^ And....for God's sakes, reply to my e-mails! I've been having regular panic attacks whenever I see your name on my favorite authors list!
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2008 13:00 CST
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You might not like the chapter, but I did! It sets the stage perfectly! Sorry for disappearing off the earth for so long. My gran died, I found a job, now I have to move... Ugh. But good luck with your work situations too! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Inoblue On: November 13, 2007 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is incredable! I love this story, and couple, so fucking much and you guys seem to be the best at writing them in character! Keep writing, and update soon!
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Reviewed By: moontatoo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found this and 'misery'; it's after midnight and I've read them in something like a marathon. I love them both, guys, and can't wait for the rest ! I envy you your ability to write plot, it's excellent and I haven't been able to stop til the final word. moontatoo
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 08:54 CDT
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I read, I love, I comment! Wow... now I'm really curious as to see what's going to happen. Drake and his Nicotine is so funny, and damn! what a cure. Hehe, I smoked secondhand smoke for a day (three friend dragged me clubbing) and the feeling in my throat was horrible... I still can't sing properly. How do you become addicted? Hell if I know. And who's the big bad guy now? I want to know!!! I love the story soo much! Oh, and I love the character development. I'm struggling with that, but you do it so easily. Having Drake struggle with himself yet still feeling as though he should be ready... you focus on the charcters seperately but still manage to intertwine everything. Sometimes I feel like I'm moving too fast. Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie! Love you guys!
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Title: *drool*
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You guys.*GLOMPS* You just don't know how great you make me feel when you take my random rants and find something actually useful in them. JJ really took Drakes mind off his nicotine cravings. I love the interaction between the two of them. I find myself tilting my head to the side while I'm reading certain scenes and awwwing (if there is such a word, ah dramatic license). I find myself daydreaming about there first time and I dread (is that spelled correctly, Kita?), well anyway I dread their first time to be awkward, so I let my mind drift and I was wondering that since Drake was so close with Dee and Ryo that maybe he would go to one or the other for some....training? ewww.....what then...advice. Uh whatever....my brain is shutting down....too much work and too little sugar intake...mind s-lowly fading in and out. Oh look gum. *snaps awake* I'm okay now, must finish before sugar wears off. This update was so needed and wanted and very much worth the wait. I can't wait to see what this twist is, I adore mysteries, but sad to say I'm kinda good at figuring them out before I reach the end of a book....which sucks, but I'm still kinda stumped as to what your twist is gonna be...I kinda have an idea, but...........I'll try to keep my mind from wandering towards that direction. I've read this update about 12 time already and I will be reading it again. Till next update girls. Your "Honorary Muse" Daxemon.
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Reviewed By: Garita [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 14:54 CDT
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I haven't read the new chapter yet, so expect another comment from me in the near future! I posted a new chapter for you two! And thank you so much for being so supportive! Things aren't going well for me at the moment either, please forgive me...
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Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: September 17, 2007 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*muses* Things are heating up! If it's not Melanie, it has to be a relative, of hers then! Her father sounded awfully bitter...Or it could be her dead husband...Dead people has been known to return to life before...
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Title: cattidono
Reviewed By: catti-dono [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 16:34 CDT
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hey..Im rather proud of myself...I only had to reread one chapter..YEAH...but am confused about their suspect...so probably will have to reread more chapters...but im a blonde and mysteries always confuse me...laughs...*ooo look cheesecake, yum...must go and eat*...catti...thanks for the love...
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