| "shiver me timbers" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: miley On: March 25, 2007 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
was good.write more.
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Reviewed By: wolfsister On: March 24, 2007 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please you have to update this it is such a good story and i can't wait to read the rest of it so update really soon PLEASE!!!!!!!!
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Title: lady kiki
Reviewed By: lady sayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please please please please pleeeeeeeeease update again. i really really enjoyed reading the first chapters...so pretty please...update soon, thanks Lady kiki
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Reviewed By: miley On: March 12, 2007 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story.very original.keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2007 04:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
YOu should keep writing. i cant wait till kagome meets the pirate(inuyasha right? or is this a sess/kag story? did u put that at the beggining and i missed it? cuz i do that ALOT.lol) this is a good story. i love pirate storys! they r so fun! pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaasssssseeeeeeee update again!!!
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Reviewed By: anonomousangle On: March 11, 2007 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a descent start, I think you could make it a little bit longer, such as explaining how they look, where they are, or perhaps a little bit of histery stating something like "They were at it again, Kagome's sister had called her names and started another fight between the two of them." (I think you called her sister Kikio but I don't remember)Perhaps a bit of a lead into would work in that area like her sister finding her singing again on the balcony or something. It is a very good idea and I think you can go far with it but you just need to expand a bit. Don't be afraid and don't hold back because I think you could make this story fly. Chelly
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Reviewed By: foreverremember66 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very good story, although there are a few spelling errors, you should continue.
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