| "shiver me timbers" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: anonomous_angel On: June 02, 2007 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Through hell and high waters I finally found your story again. I don't know why but I forgot the title. Stupid, no? I do n't have much advice for you today only compliment and thanks. First of all I wanted to thank you for your dedication and assure you, I am a girl *checks down shirt* YUP I'm a girl. Sorry lol. You're writing an excelent story, even though you could possobly put in a bit more... flowery words here and there, but it's still very good. I'm so glad you brought Sango in and made her out the way you did, even though the carrage bit could have been a tiny bit longer. Then again that would have been just filler and it appears as though you prefer to write things right out insted skirting around them with hidden words and double meanings, and thats perfictlu fine. I'm babbaling agin arn't I, and I've already gone against what I said. I'm glad that your story has gotten so many reviewes already and I'm guessing that it hasn't even really gotten to the good parts. I know I have no business asking things of you but I was wondering if in one of your upcomming chapters you could tell us aproximatly how many chapters you are thinking of putting. Just wondering, but if you don't know of forget then thats OK too. I know that life is... life so I wouldn't even think to ask that you "update update update" like some do, I only ask that you take your time and be happy with what you write before you post it. luvs ya BBYES CHELLY your angel :p
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it.update soon.
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey thanx for the update, and i don't care if there is some misspellings just u update okay? i want to read more and I want to know when InuYasha will come back. i hope there will be some Kagome/InuYasha and NOT Kikyo/InuYasha
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Reviewed By: funnyduckie1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 09:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome fic!! plz update soon!
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Title: WRTIE MORE PLZ
Reviewed By: blue-roses On: May 22, 2007 14:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, can uu like please write the next chapter soon...i just read ur story and the suspense is killing me...^^
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Title: Nani??
Reviewed By: jullun On: May 03, 2007 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tell me why u stopped? it is many readers who love's this fic and so do i. PLZ for us continue updating *cries and begging*
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Title: love
Reviewed By: LeaderInu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love pirate ya ya you love pirates yeah yeah. I love pirate. I hope Inuyasha meet kagome again and is kagome trainning to become a pirate.
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Reviewed By: anime RuLeS u all [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 22:36 CDT
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nice job! i love it so far, i think how its based around pirates & stuff is so cool! cant wait for u 2 continue!
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Reviewed By: miley On: April 08, 2007 14:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked it.mean cliffy.so are they gonna become best friends?please update soon.luck.bye.
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 03:56 CDT
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OMG!!!!! I loved it!! This is a toatally awsome story line!!! I love the whole practicing to be a pirate thing!!! I wonder what 'real' training is!!!! I can't wait so please hurry and update I'll be waiting and watching!^.^
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Reviewed By: Icywolfflame [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 16:52 CDT
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its sango isnt it?hmmm.......Id be awesome if it was and then they became Pirates together or sumfin...
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Reviewed By: Tweak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:53 CDT
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i cant bellieve ur making us wait to find out who the girl is. thats not fair! but its Sango isn't it? update soon.
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Reviewed By: miley On: April 04, 2007 12:48 CDT
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im gueesing rin is the girl am i right?
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Reviewed By: ~Sadie~ On: April 04, 2007 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I love the story, but I hate the format it's in :P, also sometimes I cannot tell who's talking. Other than all that I love it keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: anonomousangel On: March 26, 2007 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You left the third chapter at a bit of a cliff hanger but it wasn't so bad like some I've read where someone gets shot and then the chapter's over. I think you took my advice and I think you did a good job editing.I wonder though what kind of training kagome's getting from the old pirate, if you feel like it may help to put that in as a bit of a filler, just to add a bit more length, you know. Parts of it almost make you want to slap some sence into Kagome's mom because she seems to neglect her more the a little bit. I can't wait to see how kag's grown up though and I think you should put some detail into that part once you get to it, when ever you decide to. I was just wondering, are you planing on making kag's a captain of her own ship and if you are I think sango would make a good first mate and Shippo could make a descent cabin boy. Thats something alot of people forget, a cabin boy but every pirate ship has to have one.(well dosent HAVE to but most I've heard of do and they usually share a cabin with the captain with a hamock set up somewhere)You have alot of good ideas and if you ever get stuck I could probobly help you out, if you ever need it, but I don't think you will. Keep up the good work. CHELLY ( anonomous_twin-angel@hotmail.com is my email if you want it.)
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