| "A Love Reveal" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: LemonLimeMaid On: October 15, 2013 04:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a bit difficult to read at some parts because of spelling and grammar and I noticed tiny hints of OOC with Zero and Kaname. But overall, it was very good. Style of writing was decent and you definately left me wanting more! I wish there were more Zero/Yuki fics from talented writers... They are so hard to find! So update please? :) |
Reviewed By: LemonLimeMaid On: October 15, 2013 04:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a bit difficult to read at some parts because of spelling and grammar and I noticed tiny hints of OOC with Zero and Kaname. But overall, it was very good. Style of writing was decent and you definately left me wanting more! I wish there were more Zero/Yuki fics from talented writers... They are so hard to find! So update please? :) |
Reviewed By: amz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2009 03:55 EST
Comment/Review:
Didn't really start reading because I'm a spacing snob.
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Reviewed By: luella jane On: February 22, 2009 18:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job but next time proofread.It was an enjoyable piece,I read all 3 chapters, but there were some unnecessary things.The part where the bathroom was being cleaned was one of these.They would't be given things like spicy mongolian beef for dinner.That's more like panda express.No Mongolia is not in Japan.Become more familar with your characters.You often gave them dialogue they would never use, especially Kaname's 'my dear girl.'Your past and present is unconsistant, and you repeated yourself a lot.
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2008 19:43 EST
Comment/Review:
ur story is so AWESOME! i really want to see what'll happene next so please update!!!
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Reviewed By: Darknessdawns [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 14:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was really great. I wish I could find more stories like this and that you would continue writing. There aren't many zero/yuuki stories out there. I was really enjoying this one and I do hope you decide to continue. I really want Zero to get the girl for once instead of Kaname.
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Reviewed By: itslisax3 On: June 29, 2008 17:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. But, i think you should space out the paragraphs to make it easier to read. That's all. Everything else is great! ^^ P.S. This is not a flame!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2008 03:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
are u ever going to update? i really like ur story! Zero and Yuki rock!! well if ur going to continue plz do it soon!
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Reviewed By: crystalsilver4 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 16:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
its good. review plz.Font Color
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Title: omfg
Reviewed By: inufreak8910 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luved it!!!!!! XD!!! go zero!! (it'z not dat i hate Kaname i just like Zero betta) and Yuki... just take Zero!!! cauze if u don't i will!!!! muhwahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
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Title: X3
Reviewed By: Ray-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 20:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story. :3 Go Zero, get the girl! Die Kaname!! Yuuki... shut up and take Zero! Dx
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Title: yeah
Reviewed By: snowdeep On: March 11, 2007 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!! i love vampire knight and i love your story please write more chapters im dieing to know what Zero's going to do to win Yuki when Zero kissed Yuki i fainted and blushed it was great thanks i havent found a good vampire knight fanfic yet but thanks to you i have i love Vampire knight ever since i read it in Shojo Beat it in there ever month i think you capture the character of the headmaster perfectly that was funny the leaves and dirt i about died from laughter well thank and could you make your chapters longer that way it feels like it never ends thanks yours truely snowdeep
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